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DublinArnie wrote: »Very descriptive!
Some things don't make sense like "I was woking late the day I got kidnapped". Overall, sounds very interesing! Maybe look up new words and replace the simple words so you won't be repeating the same word over and word, it shows the examiner you know your verbs etc which will give marks!
14/20 .. that's a B, which is good!
okay can you give me an example of where i made those mistakes? and how does i was working late the day i got kidnapped doesn't make sense? I need to understand why its wrong so i can fix it thanks for help 0 -
It makes sense but i think the problem is Arnie. Anyway I think it's pretty good the only problem was that I didn't read the full essayLost In Confusion wrote: »okay can you give me an example of where i made those mistakes? and how does i was working late the day i got kidnapped doesn't make sense? I need to understand why its wrong so i can fix it thanks for help
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My teacher trained us to be stricter than the actual examiners .. so don't blame me if you didn't get an A!positivealf wrote: »It makes sense but i think the problem is Arnie. Anyway I think it's pretty good the only problem was that I didn't read the full essay
The essay is good standard, so don't worry. 0 -
positivealf wrote: »It makes sense but i think the problem is Arnie. Anyway I think it's pretty good the only problem was that I didn't read the full essay
i would have typed it all up its just i need to make up an ending :P0 -
Lost In Confusion wrote: »i would have typed it all up its just i need to make up an ending :P
When making endings, never go with the unrealistic "happily ever after". The examiners aren't kids anymore
so make your ending interesting and unique. I bet most girls will have a happy ending in their essays and boys will have a tragic death as their ending. 0 -
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When making endings, never go with the unrealistic "happily ever after". The examiners aren't kids anymore so make your ending interesting and unique. I bet most girls will have a happy ending in their essays and boys will have a tragic death as their ending.
lol i know my ending i just didnt put in the descriptive ending bit on it like developed it. i cud tell u what happens in a line :P0 -
Lost In Confusion wrote: »lol i know my ending i just didnt put in the descriptive ending bit on it like developed it. i cud tell u what happens in a line :P
If it's scary, no
otherwise yes ok 0 -
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Lost In Confusion wrote: »okay can you give me an example of where i made those mistakes? and how does i was working late the day i got kidnapped doesn't make sense? I need to understand why its wrong so i can fix it thanks for help
If you left it at 'I was working late that day' then it would have much more suspense as the reader needs to read on to find out what happened you.
The little bit you wrote, I enjoyed.
...and then I woke up and it was all a dream. 0 -
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