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Hey guys could you mark my answer out of 70 for Personal writing in English, I'm not sure what exam paper year this came from, I know it's not the best but short stories aren't really my thing, I'm going to do the speech but i figured I might as well try.


Write a composition on how one should spend a good Saturday evening

Coding, what exactly is coding you may ask, besides it being one of my favourite past times; coding is a tool which can be

used to create websites, games and graphics. Have you ever wondered how websites and networks such as facebook and

myspace were made? Well the answer to this is coding, there are many different types of coding languages such as python

and php, one of the most common types of languages you may have heard of are html and javascript. I have been coding

ever since I could walk and I must say it's a very rewarding experience. The perks of coding are limitless, why play video

games when you can make your own games? Furthermore coding is a skill which opens the door to your imaginationand

creativity, why be confined to endless hours on television and myspace when can be you can be creating the next

facebook! If you've been paying attention to great revolutionaries such as Bill Gates you'll surely know that coding is the

next big thing, with thousands of occupational prospects why wouldn't you want to code? It's always best to start now than

later.

After spending hours sitting in front of a screen coding what's better than have a great workout session to loosen those

joint? Exercise is a great way to improve your body's condition and strenghten those bones, it's a proven fact that workouts

such as cardiovascular activies can decrease the risk of high blood pressure. One of the greatest aspects about coding is

that it can be done in many forms such as football, tennis, basketball or even meditation. I admit going to parties are fun

however your healthy should come first, right? Keeping your body fit can also keep your mind fit and healthy too.

A good workout is beneficial for your body but what of your brain? Well what better way to exercise and engage your brain

by reading? Now many young adults have many different opinions on reading and many of them would be somewhere

along the lines of "reading is way too boring!". I'm sure however that if people actually took the time to read their opinions of

reading would be a lot more different. Reading not only stimulates your brain, it also improves your vocabulary and opens

up a new world, why do the smart people always spend their time reading? Well it's obvious, they have discovered a whole

new world where their imaginations are free to roam, reading allows people to be more aware of their surroundings. What's

better way to end a good Saturday evening than by reading.

From the above points, spending a Saturday evening partying and gaming can be evidently seen as unproductive and

pointless compared to spending your time being more productive by doing activies such as reaing, coding or exercising, which to many young adults, appear "lame". Which are actually, really enjoyable.