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DJ SC

was bored today so i went into an old tune and changed it round abit think its come out quite cool tho.
its warcraft remix
all feedback is very much appreciated.
cheers
http://www.myspace.com/djscdnb

seannash

seannash wrote: »

i know i should know better than to post an unfinished piece here but ive spent all day from 9 this morning to 11:30 at night working on this and im questioning what ive done with it.


its a bag of ideas at the moment,i think i might have tried to turn a simple groove into something alot bigger than it can be but then again i think on some level it works(i could be wrong on that one)
anyway its very rough,gonna finish it tomorrow after i figure out what to do with it.

i do love the intro though so i reckon ill be doing a dub version of it.:pac:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/654536358a1e6f86/

okay so i got the arrangement/components sone.need to do a better mixdown but its almost done

http://soundcloud.com/seannash/sean-nash-soho-128-kbps

empirix

DJ SC wrote: »

was bored today so i went into an old tune and changed it round abit think its come out quite cool tho.
its warcraft remix
all feedback is very much appreciated.
cheers
http://www.myspace.com/djscdnb

interesting, you have got something,good ideas,maybe a little more work needed but keep at it and ill say itll come good for you, nice one! now is that a real cp company jacket your wearing or is it a fake!!

Anima

DJ SC wrote: »

was bored today so i went into an old tune and changed it round abit think its come out quite cool tho.
its warcraft remix
all feedback is very much appreciated.
cheers
http://www.myspace.com/djscdnb

I like it

Dragan

Collaboration with York based Producer, DJ and radio presenter Diakon.

Getting lots of interest, and an interesting remix on the way with some vocals.

http://soundcloud.com/diakondub/in-sickness-in-stealth-instrumental

thrush

hey. finished this track recently, or rather abandoned it. it's definitely missing something (actually a lot of things i reckon!), any thoughts on what to avoid/change in future would be nice...:)

<<soundcloud>>

chairs!

Music-and-booze

hey heres a link to my stuff, its kinda acid house electro or whatever haha - www.myspace.com/chijoumusic

any feedback good or bad would be greatly appreciated:D

loveforcelbridg

Two new tunes, A very bouncy remix of jen's loop n ting's
and a quick tune I made inspired by untidy dubs.
Good for a 15 year old eh ? :pac:
http://soundcloud.com/marclar
drop us a comment if you want

DJ SC

loveforcelbridg wrote: »

Two new tunes, A very bouncy remix of jen's loop n ting's
and a quick tune I made inspired by untidy dubs.
Good for a 15 year old eh ? :pac:
http://soundcloud.com/marclar
drop us a comment if you want

not bad man need a little work tho.
an u dont need to keep sayin your only 15.lol

loveforcelbridg

yeah,cus' i like it when people say thats good for your age :pac::pac::pac::pac::pac:

jtsuited

Howdy Folks, finally wrapping up some tracks now for shipping and whatnot, thought I'd share....

Kid Handsome - Scrabble

jtsuited

and another (this time a lot deeper)

When I have Fears That I may Cease to Be

empirix

excellent tunes JT:)

jtsuited

empirix wrote: »

excellent tunes JT:)

thank you kindly sir.:)

Music-and-booze

hey got some new stuff up if anyone wants to check it out, kinda acid house electro or sumthin, i know i posted a while back but just reworked some stuff so... any comments would be greatly appreciated:D

music's here www.myspace.com/chijoumusic

cheers!

romarr

been working on this for a little while .... feedback / criticism appreciated
http://soundcloud.com/ronan-marr/lite-night-demo-mix

ronan

seannash

Music-and-booze wrote: »

hey got some new stuff up if anyone wants to check it out, kinda acid house electro or sumthin, i know i posted a while back but just reworked some stuff so... any comments would be greatly appreciated:D

music's here www.myspace.com/chijoumusic

cheers!

do yourself a favour and get a soundcloud account,myspace players are too problematic

seannash

romarr wrote: »

been working on this for a little while .... feedback / criticism appreciated
http://soundcloud.com/ronan-marr/lite-night-demo-mix

ronan

comments on sc,not very positive unfortunately

romarr

seannash wrote: »

comments on sc,not very positive unfortunately

thanks for having a listen sean ...

re-work imminent !

Tuff Break

Hows it going folks!!

Would love some feedback on any of the tracks posted up here! In the process of making an album, so would be great to hear any criticisms about these, so i can fix them!!!

http://soundcloud.com/economusic

Thanks a mil,
Jeff.

jtsuited

Alrright, I don't tend to post works in progress so here goes. Feedback appreciated. Have a good feeling about this one

http://soundcloud.com/kid-handsome/like-a-new-born-rough-enough-demo-mix

Coherx

Hey guys need some feedback on my tracks its www.soundcloud.com/Coherx been working on them a while if anybody has interest let me know:D

Peace

Dragan

Another collab....

this time with Producer ( and rock climber ) Tommy Wilson, under his funk breaks title of Milyoo (he also has his Tasty side project ).

Being half way up a sheer cliff face must give you an odd perspective, because Tommy does some incredibly interesting music, and i was very lucky to get to work with him.

http://soundcloud.com/tasty/shatterfreakcollab

starttheend

Hi All

This is the first track I have finished. Would appreciate any comments/ feedback.

Cheers

http://soundcloud.com/conorholmes/control-28

loveforcelbridg

Thats lovely, sounds like something you hear about 3 in the morning on the pirate stations, what is that music called ?

hubiedubie

starttheend wrote: »

Hi All

This is the first track I have finished. Would appreciate any comments/ feedback.

Cheers

http://soundcloud.com/conorholmes/control-28

Hi Conor,
Had a quick listen to your track Control. I'm no pro at this malarkey but here's my feedback anyway:

Overall Vibe/ Groove:
I like it, would definitely get my head nodding. Like the reverby washed out feel with the throbbing bass in the background,

Sound Design / Selection:
Some nice synth sounds: Nice pluck, nice watery sound that comes in around 2.35., nice whistly sound.

Arrangement:
Needs more variation - maybe try introducing some random fx swells, here and there to keep things interesting. Also try and humanise your percussion with little fills / licks every few measures.

The pluck synth sound that goes through most of the track should be taken out at some point. Additionally I'd like to have heard some more melodic elements (this is just personal preference) at some point, maybe a dark sounding pad or minor stab hits.

Also you could do with more percussion elements to keep driving the track. I can only hear a kick, clap, hat and ride cymbal. You could add some bongos, toms, claves or something similar to give it a bit more rhythm. It doesn't have to be a full on rhythm even an off beat bongo lick sent to reverb every 4 bars can really help drive the track (for an example of this and check out Joris Voorn - Deep Side of the Moog).

Mixing:
From what I can hear the mix to be cleaned up: especially around the bass end (I was listening on headphones so take my advice with a pinch of salt). I found it hard to hear the kick with a bass that size. You could try the following and see if they help (I'm not saying they will but it's what i'd try):

1. Gentle sidechain compression of the bass with the kick. This should bring the level of the bass pattern down when the kick hits. How hard you compress is personal preference and depends on whether you want to actually hear the compression.
2. Use eq to give the kick and the bass each their own space in the mix. Find where one peaks using an spectrum analyser and then cut the the other instrument at around that frequency. In your case the bass sounds pretty subby, so you may want to cut the kick at around 40HZ and then possibly boost the kick( or cut the bass) a little higher (whatever sounds best though)
3. Reduce the release time on the bass synth so that it's tail isnt overlapping with the kick.

Overall I thought it was a good first effort and as I said, got my head nodding which is half the battle.

Tuff Break

Hey all,

http://loopmasters.wordpress.com

This track is fairly new and has made it to the last 8, in a Loopmasters competition!! Nice one!!.... Its open now to public voting.. hence the reason i am posting this!!

Im lookin for people to have a quick listen to the track and if they like what they hear, stick a vote to it!! Voting is seriously easy.. ya dont have to sign up to anything, and it takes about 20sec to do!!!

I work under the name of Economusic.. and the track is called Forced Perspective...

Whats more.. if you do listen to the track and dont like it.. please send us some feedback..

Thanks a million for your time folks..

JD

Oh yeah.. my other tracks can be found at www.soundcloud.com/economusic

Thanks again!!

D_Conn

hey

http://soundcloud.com/d-conn/stagnant-call

comments and suggestions appreciated

seannash

Sean Nash & Ollie Jones-New Track

okay so this is a very rough sketch of my latest one.its a collab between me and a fella called ollie jones.
truth be told i did 99% of this(through no fault of ollies)but hell be doing a big room version using the melody in the breakdown.

mixdown isnt good and it has some mad issues with the volume automating spiking but i figured id throw it up as i dont know when ill get time to finish it off and wouldnt mind some feedback on it as it is

http://www.zshare.net/audio/671496257131c7f7/

cheers

jtsuited

nice sean. music wise/feel wise/groove wise it seems great. i'd sort out a lot of the 'dodgier' sounds on it though.