KevIRL wrote: » Okay Going from Seannash's thread earlier here is a thread for you to post your tracks, and also for forum users to give feedback. You dont have to like the track, but we do ask when giving feedback to keep it constructive. One liner reviews like 'track is a load of crap' are not welcome here. Give some reasons as to why you dont like it, even better give some ideas on how the producer might improve it. Producers - Be a bit thick skinned please, remember your track isnt always going to a masterpiece. There is always room for improvement. In thread bitching and fighting, or acting the tool Is a sure fire way to get a forced break from the forum
jtsuited wrote: » Fresh off the cutting room floor (as in it was finished yesterday)Soundcloud linky - dj's pm me for 320 promo Compliments, criticism, queries welcome. A healthy dose of abuse even more so.:pac::pac::pac:
seannash wrote: » i absolutely love this track.was playing it all day yesterday one of your finest i reckon
fitz wrote: » I like this a lot. The depth of the track is cracking. Brilliant use of reverbs.
seannash wrote: » okay so i know i posted this already but what the hellhttp://soundcloud.com/seannash/sean-nash-sedation-original-mix-demo im really pleased with how this one turned out.my only real concern is the snare.i gonna wait a few days and go back to it and see if its still bothering me
jtsuited wrote: » thanks guys. it's one i'm very happy with at the moment. i'm sure in two weeks i'll hate it!
SteveDon wrote: » Ha, thats always the way tho isnt it? Its a cool track alright, production wise its truly brilliant, nice and polished sound. Drum work is great. Id personally prefer a bigger room version of the track, the constant rhythm is very pounding i think this could be complemented a bit more with bigger breakdowns and a more intense kick in at the end. Thats just personal taste tho i guess. Very cool tho nonetheless
jtsuited wrote: » yeah, I'm always tempted to push the big room epicness button, and held back in this track. I'll most likely do a big version for the release too. With big fcuk off cannons, and explosions and 2 minute filter sweeps, and whatnot!:pac::pac:
BaZmO* wrote: » And not forgetting a Donk of course.
jtsuited wrote: » the new kick and reverb instead of delay really improves it. mix might be a bit bass heavy. snare is a little on the nasty side. personally i'd go for a clap for that type of track to fill out the impact range a bit. but that's all taste issues anywho good shtuff
seannash wrote: » yeah that snare has been niggling at me all day today.ill have to change it out.
jtsuited wrote: » and then you'll change it out. and you'll realise 'hmmmm, now i don't think the hats suit the snare'. so you change them. and then you think the bass doesn't sound right with the new hats and snare (and they're completely rocking because ya just put them in now). And soon you've created some sort of acid/funky/bigroom/ethnic jam involving field recordings of antarctica and real whales.... and all ya wanted was a different snare drum!
romarr wrote: » my first efforts ! 3 tunes that actually got some way finished !click to soundcloud loads of room for improvement so appreciate some constructive criticism and comments (cc & c ?!) as for genre ... don't have the foggiest started trying my hand at this some 9 / 10 months ago, come from a more traditional guitar based band background ... yours truly the drummer (also a bit of triangle here and there) ... have always loved my techno, and pounding my feet to the beat of a sweet bass drum so much to learn so little time ! looking forward to all that this forum can be, tis shaping up fine ta
SteveDon wrote: » Been busting my balls today and i managed to churn this outhttp://www15.zippyshare.com/v/85168822/file.html its a 20 minute excerpt from my live set which i will be performing next saturday in kennedys Any feedback will be highly appreciated as im quite nervous/anxious for next saturday.
jtsuited wrote: » holy crap man, that's awesome. send me a few tracks will ya?
seannash wrote: » seriously great stuff man. was just saying to vinyl junkie on the radio sync chat that i needed to catch one of your live sets. great stuff
SteveDon wrote: » thanks man, just been listening to your track actually and im really digging the groove youve got going when it breaks in with the bass at around one minute the rhythm youve got going there is sweet, the bass is quite fat to say the least and i like that synth sound thats introduced at around 1.30 and goes throughout the song, the stabs are also a thumbs up for me aswell only thing i would maybe change is the white noise at the start, think it cuts away a bit abruptly, id like to maybe see a few more sounds in the main breakdown, but these are only minor gripes really great track
seannash wrote: » thanks man.im gonna look at that snare i got and the ill shot you over a 320. anychance i can get one of your kitchen sync sets off you. youve wetted my appetite with that 20 minute mix:D
SteveDon wrote: » This is actually my first live set, started getting to work on it about 3 weeks ago. Got frustrated in the beginning cause it was difficult to mix my existing patterns together cause they were just too different, so i ended up just going back to the drawing board with the plan to make like an hour and a half of new patterns. Previewed a different half hour of the set on the sync here http://www.ustream.tv/recorded/1569093 Got about 1 hour 20 minutes now hopefully maybe be able to strech it to 2 hours for next saturday.
This is actually my first live set, started getting to work on it about 3 weeks ago.
