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Story I'm writing for all my friends at AH

Dublindude69 · 2010-08-04 13:10:09

I just started writing this story, I was wondering if I could get tips and things here. I'll post more as I write it. The Stench It's a sunny hot day in the middle of July in Dublin. At the Stillorgan Industrial Estate and there is a Caravan parked illegally at the side of the road. Inside the Caravan we see a man in his…

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#32 04-08-2010 2:37pm
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Dublindude69 wrote: »

jealus lot, I'm trying to write a story that also serves as a warning of what might happen.

A warning of what might happen? You mean there could be an entire book to follow?

:eek:

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#33 04-08-2010 2:39pm
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TL: DR.

I see no paragraphs.

You have impugned me, good sir. *glove slap*

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#34 04-08-2010 2:40pm
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Renn wrote: »

Five lines down? Impressive.

Dublindude69 wrote: »

I just started writing this story, I was wondering if I could get tips and things here. I'll post more as I write it.

Hey Renn, they must have done reading and riting at your school, but no rithmetic.:P

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#35 04-08-2010 2:43pm
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Dublindude69 wrote: »

Hey I worked really hard on this. I think it's really important and has a bit to say about our climate at the moment
PS, who is Trent?

Trent is a character created by a Boards.ie user, Paadraig. It began here, to loads of criticism (see thread) but then when people started to like it the same people who criticised it didn't like to feel left out ....

Such is life and the whim of the bandwagon-jumping Boards.ie populace.

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#36 04-08-2010 2:55pm
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I'm beginning to suspect I might need to add some boards.ie members to the story. :mad:

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#37 04-08-2010 2:58pm
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Dublindude69 wrote: »

Are you all saying I shouldn't continue it?

I enjoyed it continue it:) ,last place to ask is here tbh;)

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#38 04-08-2010 2:58pm
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Dionysus wrote: »

Trent is a character created by a Boards.ie user, Paadraig. It began here, to loads of criticism (see thread) but then when people started to like it the same people who criticised it didn't like to feel left out ....

Such is life and the whim of the bandwagon-jumping Boards.ie populace.

Except that's not actually true, is it?

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#39 04-08-2010 2:59pm
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are you on smack?

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#40 04-08-2010 2:59pm
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Dublindude69 wrote: »

I'm beginning to suspect I might need to add some boards.ie members to the story. :mad:

Dude fcuk the critics , I am enjoying your story laced with stereotypical sh!te. Please continue I look forward to the next chapter.

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#41 04-08-2010 3:01pm
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ejmaztec wrote: »

Hey Renn, they must have done reading and riting at your school, but no rithmetic.:P

Nah, I'm still winning this, your post suggested you were reading the story.

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#42 04-08-2010 3:04pm
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Dublindude69 wrote: »

I'm beginning to suspect I might need to add some boards.ie members to the story. :mad:

Uh oh, our names maybe tainted....

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#43 04-08-2010 3:04pm
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Wazdakka wrote: »

Tl:dr

Also...
I'm not your friend, buddy..

I'm not your buddy, guy.

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#44 04-08-2010 3:14pm
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Why would you write something like that? It was a disgusting read

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#45 04-08-2010 3:25pm
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Cheeky_gal wrote: »

Why would you write something like that? It was a disgusting read

Irvine Welsh has made a career out of disgusting reads. Though there is a difference between his stuff & the OPs, most notably the quality.

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#46 04-08-2010 3:29pm
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I've had more fun reading Mills and Boon.

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#47 04-08-2010 3:31pm
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Rowley Birkin QC wrote: »

I'm not your buddy, guy.

I'm not your guy, dude.

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#48 04-08-2010 3:40pm
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biko wrote: »

I'm not your guy, dude.

I'm not your dude, pal.

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#49 04-08-2010 3:43pm
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Rowley Birkin QC wrote: »

I'm not your dude, pal.

He's not your pal, mate!

How long can we keep this up?

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#50 04-08-2010 3:46pm
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steve06 wrote: »

He's not your pal, mate!

How long can we keep this up?

I'm not your mate friend!

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#51 04-08-2010 3:50pm
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--Kaiser-- wrote: »

I'm not your mate friend!

Im not your friend, hombre!

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#52 04-08-2010 3:54pm
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Total Trent ripoff, posting in AH to try and get the same legendary status.

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#53 04-08-2010 4:03pm
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neilthefunkeone wrote: »

Im not your friend, hombre!

I'm not your hombre, bro.

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#54 04-08-2010 4:04pm
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Hrududu wrote: »

Total Trent ripoff, posting in AH to try and get the same legendary status.

How is it a Trent ripoff? There was no sex in it.

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#55 04-08-2010 4:09pm
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Rowley Birkin QC wrote: »

I'm not your hombre, bro.

I'm not your bro, comrade!

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#56 04-08-2010 4:20pm
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i'm not your comrade, bub.

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#57 04-08-2010 4:20pm
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--Kaiser-- wrote: »

I'm not your bro, comrade!

i'm not your comrade, paisano!

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#58 04-08-2010 4:21pm
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genericguy wrote: »

i'm not your comrade, paisano!

I'm not your paisano, homes.

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#59 04-08-2010 4:22pm
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Rowley Birkin QC wrote: »

I'm not your paisano, homes.

i'm not your homes, chum.

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#60 04-08-2010 4:22pm
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Renn wrote: »

Nah, I'm still winning this, your post suggested you were reading the story.

One must never assume.:P

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#61 04-08-2010 4:27pm
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genericguy wrote: »

i'm not your homes, chum.

I'm not your chum, esse!

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