Can you rap? let the people decide

j2u

thanx to everybodys opinions,i was just annoyed because i didnt know exactly what orizo was saying by the way he was saying it,but like i said i appreciate both good and bad opinions on it,thanx

Orizio

I liked your rhyme btw,if you didn't happen to catch that.

dar83

J2u, nice. Some proper stuff going on there.

The other effort..... the less said the better.

I've got a gat/ look at that/hoes all on my dcik/makin my chevy 4 door look sick/ etc....

Where do I sign?

evil_seed

My rhymes are so tight, you'd think i'm a jew,
My flow can't be beat, dude i'm just better than you,
The way i spit my words off the top off my brain,
have everybody up on these boards like "yo this cats insane"
Cos its seed muhfukas, like y'all aint know,
can't no one replace me cos i'm runnin the show,
Foes is skatin from me, hoes be waitin on me, and i couldn't give 2 ****s if everybody hatin on me
but i know i aint' a gangsta, never shot a gun or pushed weight,
the only weight i know about is what i gain from a plate

N05H3AD

i like that...alot:D

evil_seed

cheers. i might drop a few more lines if others do.:rolleyes:

aftermathcrew

nice.i'd like to hear more.nice work

evil_seed

not as good, but here ......

yo, i'ma do me, you try do you
you think you can walk the walk, then walk in my shoes
cos my rhymes are intergaltical,
fool you need to go back to school,
then you'll find the time
to learn how to rhyme.
i'm the one like neo, like jet li i'm a hero
how do i know this.. yo, cos my bank account has so many zero's

Sm0ke

ur lacking a solid flow and u need to work on your rhyming.

Evil Seed lacks the guts- never gonna top me, see?
you know I got this **** in the bag... like a colostomy
now quite obviously- I'm torchin' these fruits
have you like western fans... way you'll worship the duke
cuz everyone knows I'm best- but u keep it bottled inside
so I'LL write 'esteem' on My dick... n make u swallow ya pride

lol just messing with ya!

evil_seed

Sm0ke wrote:

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lol just messing with ya!

we'll leave the battle raps for another day

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lets go back to the days when hip hop was more fun,
no bling bling, no bitches and no guns,
when beef was just meat, deep messages that were sweet,
and run dmc rocked adidias on they feet.
cos it was all fun back then,
in the days back when,
you spent time in the pen,
you was writing rhymes in ur den.
can't y'all see whats happenin,
with these fakes that are rappin and,
they saying somethin without sayin anythin

Makaveli

Sm0ke wrote:

so I'LL write 'esteem' on My dick... n make u swallow ya pride

I lol'ed. If that line is your own and not bitten then fair play to you. Funny stuff. Good work.

Damage

Can i rap?,ill let the people decide,cos im white,not a gangsta i've got nthin to hide,i live in a village not a city or a slum,but if theres trouble ill def-i-nitely come.To back up my side,to show my pride and never turn my back or never run and hide.If i was to live for tomorrow and a day,id only make sure that ye all hear what i say,To rap,its not black,not white or not anything,it dont gotta be harsh,not cruel or menacing,you gotta have the flow,the right words to throw,to spit the only truth that you ever will know.This rap sh1t you love it,no other question of it and if they took it from you then you'd have to rise above it,to find a way,those lyrics that you spray,take time to pray for just another day,to show yourself what you really can do,Can I really rap?Its all up to YOU!!

Maybe the first rap i have ever actually put down on "paper" or anythin so let me know.The beat to it may be a bit strange just try and fit a beat to it.

Ay Cee

N05H3AD wrote:

this is a rap i made a few weeks ago, it's pretty sh1te but, sure, what can you do. P.S i know the first bit is from Deep cover.

Tonight’s the night I’m getting in some sh1t, gon’ killin u niggaz coz I feel like it,

Just curious as to how many "niggaz" you hang with and if you refer to them as such?

spacecoyote

just wanted to go back to a point N05H3AD made earlier about rapping about "niggaz" cos what else could he rap about being from ireland? Just wondered out of curiosity if he'd listened to any Irish hip-hop? Because you might be surprised to find that there's plenty of subject matter that Irish rappers have found to deal with through their music based on their lives in Ireland. They rap in their own dialect, using their own slang, about their own experiences and thats what works. Try listening to some, if you're looking for somewhere to start as an MC

Ay Cee

www.thegudmen.com
www.myspace.com/mcaycee
www.myspace.com/thegudmen
Might be a start

spacecoyote

I set 'em up...

Ay Cee wrote:

www.thegudmen.com
www.myspace.com/mcaycee
www.myspace.com/thegudmen
Might be a start

(^^^shameless plug )

you knock em down

Ay Cee

You know how we do dawg, pimpin' aint ez

spacecoyote

fo' sho' mo-fo, i know how it go

Sm0ke

Makaveli wrote:

I lol'ed. If that line is your own and not bitten then fair play to you. Funny stuff. Good work.

i always google peoples **** if i think their biting

ty!

N05H3AD

spacecoyote wrote:

just wanted to go back to a point N05H3AD made earlier about rapping about "niggaz" cos what else could he rap about being from ireland? Just wondered out of curiosity if he'd listened to any Irish hip-hop? Because you might be surprised to find that there's plenty of subject matter that Irish rappers have found to deal with through their music based on their lives in Ireland. They rap in their own dialect, using their own slang, about their own experiences and thats what works. Try listening to some, if you're looking for somewhere to start as an MC

i actually said rapping about Wexford and I live out in the country so I (personally) couldn't think of other raps and also i have explained my rap if you look a few posts back, maybe i will think of a proper "Irish" rap to get people off my back!!!!

Damage

what ye think of my rap above,anyone???

KING T

not bad, not bad...N05H3AD's rap was attrocious and an insult to rap

LegacyUser

Smokes was good...

N05H3AD's rap was ****ING PATHETIC

Sm0ke

My head hurts, eyes black, neck-whip-lashes-back
is it fact ? that verbalized words match a harsh attack
thats compact My life flashes and all i see is sins
redemption for respectin'! is this where hell begins
the bell rings, a light bulb flashes above my head
do u see the misery inside me? does love mean ur dead
always seein red does stinginess bring me this afterlife
i seen how many faults man bought and i laughed at the price
i matched it twice if u think a brain influenced is better
if u lie a piece of u dies, no matter the weather
he asked is this where i settle? I said im in ur fate!
is it too late to realease hate and make them spirits escape
just wait ? i see the meaning of life now from what i been through
its what u have learned in the process not ..what u have to do
Do u even believe in God, a price for pain or a greater power
or the wealth of a man is in what he makes an hour!

just digging up old **** i wrote!
what i ca write and what i can spit are 2 diffrent things

Damage

very good smoke,i like

chillywilly

im in your backgarden wearing nothin but your knicks. Im a sick motherf*cker its how i get my kicks:D i can rap:D

Sm0ke

Damage wrote:

very good smoke,i like

thanks man

Damage

My ears are ringin,i'm spinnin in this grave,all i ever wanna do is misbehave,im trapped,im strapped, with nothin but a pen, goin over lyrics in my head agian and again.Tryin to find a way outta this mess,this stress,eating me chewin through my vest,my chest its poundin with rage,my age?im trapped in a cage with nothin to guage.Someone release me,someone just teach me, to cope, give me hope,break me free,bring back me.Im feelin the freedom,feelin the breeze,flowin these lyrics with simplistic ease,im out,no doubt from that dark deep down place, once again my mind starts to race.My thoughts flood my head,not dark but instead,the light of the skies,once again open eyes.Back to before,not there anymore,now all i gotta do i go shut the door,and turn on that key and forever be free,to spit to the world about all that is me.

got a bit deep F'd up i know but have no idea where it came from

Sm0ke

Damage wrote:

My ears are ringin,i'm spinnin in this grave,all i ever wanna do is misbehave,im trapped,im strapped, with nothin but a pen, goin over lyrics in my head agian and again.Tryin to find a way outta this mess,this stress,eating me chewin through my vest,my chest its poundin with rage,my age?im trapped in a cage with nothin to guage.Someone release me,someone just teach me, to cope, give me hope,break me free,bring back me.Im feelin the freedom,feelin the breeze,flowin these lyrics with simplistic ease,im out,no doubt from that dark deep down place, once again my mind starts to race.My thoughts flood my head,not dark but instead,the light of the skies,once again open eyes.Back to before,not there anymore,now all i gotta do i go shut the door,and turn on that key and forever be free,to spit to the world about all that is me.

got a bit deep F'd up i know but have no idea where it came from

flow on that is cool nice and easy to catch on to aswell!

nice work

iFight

Sm0ke wrote:

My head hurts, eyes black, neck-whip-lashes-back
is it fact ? that verbalized words match a harsh attack
thats compact My life flashes and all i see is sins
redemption for respectin'! is this where hell begins
the bell rings, a light bulb flashes above my head
do u see the misery inside me? does love mean ur dead
always seein red does stinginess bring me this afterlife
i seen how many faults man bought and i laughed at the price
i matched it twice if u think a brain influenced is better
if u lie a piece of u dies, no matter the weather
he asked is this where i settle? I said im in ur fate!
is it too late to realease hate and make them spirits escape
just wait ? i see the meaning of life now from what i been through
its what u have learned in the process not ..what u have to do
Do u even believe in God, a price for pain or a greater power
or the wealth of a man is in what he makes an hour!

just digging up old **** i wrote!
what i ca write and what i can spit are 2 diffrent things

lol...cool, how fast can you say all that? Presuming you rap yourself