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  • #1532
    DarkJager
    Closed Accounts Posts: 7,960 ✭✭✭DarkJager


    Android 666 wrote: »
    Latest demo up. Another dubstep one. Feedback always appreciated:

    http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/other-lifetimes

    Very nice track bud, its got a really nice trippy ambience to it. Great job :)


  • #1533
    DarkJager
    Closed Accounts Posts: 7,960 ✭✭✭DarkJager


    This is my latest track, went back to a trance vibe for this one. Its called Pandemic and any feedback is much appreciated ;)

    http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/pandemic


  • #1534
    Android 666
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,577 ✭✭✭Android 666


    DarkJager wrote: »
    Very nice track bud, its got a really nice trippy ambience to it. Great job :)

    Cheers for listening DJ. Had a listen to your tune and there's some really cool stuff happening there. I think you should change the piano for something a bit more rhytmic like a xylophone or something. Besides that it sounds great.


  • #1535
    seannash
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 5,665 ✭✭✭seannash


    DarkJager wrote: »
    This is my latest track, went back to a trance vibe for this one. Its called Pandemic and any feedback is much appreciated ;)

    http://soundcloud.com/cloud-10/pandemic
    Theres somthing not quite right about the low octave bassy note that plays with the piano,doesnt sound right


  • #1536
    Android 666
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,577 ✭✭✭Android 666


    Here's the other one I finished at the weekend:

    http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/knowing-you


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  • #1537
    SteveDon
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    Android 666 wrote: »
    Here's the other one I finished at the weekend:

    http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/knowing-you

    Your songs are getting better and better with every one. Really like the bass in this one. Keep it up.


  • #1538
    SteveDon
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    Taking a break for a while from making house and techno.

    Trying to come up with something that has a little more emotion to convey that just your average dancefloor track.

    This is the first track ive finished for this project.

    The Clock:

    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-clock

    Would appreciate some thoughts as always!


  • #1539
    Android 666
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,577 ✭✭✭Android 666


    SteveDon wrote: »
    Taking a break for a while from making house and techno.

    Trying to come up with something that has a little more emotion to convey that just your average dancefloor track.

    This is the first track ive finished for this project.

    The Clock:

    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-clock

    Would appreciate some thoughts as always!

    Some nice stuff going on here Steve, to me though it feels that some of the elements are a bit too in the background. It would be nice to hear the synth a the beginning a bit louder throughout the whole thing. And just a suggestion but I think a trickling rain sample with be much suited to the track as background noise than the vinyl sample.


  • #1540
    SteveDon
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    Android 666 wrote: »
    Some nice stuff going on here Steve, to me though it feels that some of the elements are a bit too in the background. It would be nice to hear the synth a the beginning a bit louder throughout the whole thing. And just a suggestion but I think a trickling rain sample with be much suited to the track as background noise than the vinyl sample.

    Cheers for listening, i get what you mean. I was trying to keep it very subtle but i think i could possibly bring the higher synths out more.


  • #1541
    SteveDon
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    Android 666 wrote: »
    Some nice stuff going on here Steve, to me though it feels that some of the elements are a bit too in the background. It would be nice to hear the synth a the beginning a bit louder throughout the whole thing. And just a suggestion but I think a trickling rain sample with be much suited to the track as background noise than the vinyl sample.

    Did a little tinkering with the levels, still keeping it subtle enough.

    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-clock

    Dont have a rain effect. Im pretty happy with the background tho, its just ambience from a cafe in holland.


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  • #1542
    Android 666
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,577 ✭✭✭Android 666


    SteveDon wrote: »
    Did a little tinkering with the levels, still keeping it subtle enough.

    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-clock

    Dont have a rain effect. Im pretty happy with the background tho, its just ambience from a cafe in holland.

    Yeah that sounds way better. Really nice track.


  • #1543
    SteveDon
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    Android 666 wrote: »
    Yeah that sounds way better. Really nice track.

    Cheers man, thanks for the input, does sound much better now.


  • #1544
    Splinters
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 905 ✭✭✭Splinters


    Soundcloud hasnt been too kind to the last few tracks I tried uploading so Ill just a link to a rar'ed mp3 instead. Just finished this one this morning. Still a bit I wanna tweak with the mix but Im really liking how its shaping up. Quite a strong Dubstep vibe going on, nice and dirty :)

    http://www.becomingproductions.net/2.rar


  • #1545
    dasdog
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2, Paid Member Posts: 4,000 ✭✭✭dasdog


    It's a bit scrappy

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pAsmx-128VU

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  • #1546
    krd
    Banned (with Prison Access) Posts: 3,455 ✭✭✭krd


    dasdog wrote: »
    It's a bit scrappy

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pAsmx-128VU

    Seriously....f'ing cool.

    Especially, liked how you reversed that writing to make it look like Russian.

    Dasdog - take five chips of solid Nitrogen frozen chips of gold - and place those chips in your bank account...............You have earned them

    Thank you for defending the planet

    More!!


  • #1547
    SteveDon
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 749 ✭✭✭SteveDon


    dasdog wrote: »
    It's a bit scrappy

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pAsmx-128VU

    this is deadly, really like it, do you have any more tunes like this?


  • #1548
    keithkk16
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 909 ✭✭✭keithkk16


    New track i worked on over the weekend.
    Still needs a bit of work done to it.
    Has a Tech House/Prog House vibe to it .
    Opinions would be greatly appreciated :)
    http://soundcloud.com/scoob89/koffi-castle-of-noise


  • #1549
    lazyatom
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 82 ✭✭lazyatom


    posted a new track, Reactor No 2, up on Soundcloud if anyone wants to have a listen. probably the most effort i've ever put into a track in some mad attempt to create a track that is less like my normal stuff, and more... Berghain-ish, and failing so totally and utterly.

    http://soundcloud.com/lustbader/reactor-no-2-siren-song-mix

    another ambient discordant intro and layers and layers of sounds leading up to the inevitable last third crescendo i have been desperately trying to avoid.

    spent like, f•cking AAAAAAAGES tweaking every sound to get stuff jump out or hide down in the mix, and freaking days structuring the bloody thing.

    kinda proud of it but utterly hate it too.

    so, uh, yeah... have a listen if you want to waste, like, fifteen minutes of your life. i mean, fifteen minutes??? wtf was i thinking? i can't seem to get any tune of mine in under 8 mins, let alone make a radio friendly choon.

    any feedback would be welcome. even a genre placement would help...


  • #1550
    Carl Sagan
    Closed Accounts Posts: 856 ✭✭✭Carl Sagan


    SteveDon wrote: »
    Did a little tinkering with the levels, still keeping it subtle enough.

    http://soundcloud.com/steve-donaldson/the-clock

    Dont have a rain effect. Im pretty happy with the background tho, its just ambience from a cafe in holland.

    Loved it :)


  • #1551
    keithkk16
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 909 ✭✭✭keithkk16


    Another track I just finished up has a deep house/prog house feel to it.
    http://soundcloud.com/scoob89/robert-babicz-remote-kiss


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  • #1552
    Carl Sagan
    Closed Accounts Posts: 856 ✭✭✭Carl Sagan


    keithkk16 wrote: »
    Another track I just finished up has a deep house/prog house feel to it.
    http://soundcloud.com/scoob89/robert-babicz-remote-kiss

    Thought it was great. Nice beat and melody. Love the break too. :)


  • #1553
    seannash
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 5,665 ✭✭✭seannash


    Carl Sagan wrote: »
    Thought it was great. Nice beat and melody. Love the break too. :)
    agree,nice track


  • #1554
    AfroSonic
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 52 ✭✭AfroSonic


    Howdy... first track up - http://soundcloud.com/afrosonic/oscillate

    Chillout type feel to it. Not much post production work done to it so feedback and suggestions welcome.

    Cheers.


  • #1555
    keithkk16
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 909 ✭✭✭keithkk16


    Carl Sagan wrote: »
    Thought it was great. Nice beat and melody. Love the break too. :)
    seannash wrote: »
    agree,nice track

    Cheers lads :) thanks for the feedback.


  • #1556
    Exoskeleton
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 53 ✭✭Exoskeleton


    My first track, doesn't really have a proper outro and I need to work on a proper intro, but everything else I'm happy with. Let's see what anyone else has to say. It's drum and bass but influenced by harder genres like UK garage and dubstep.
    http://soundcloud.com/exoskeleton/exoskeleton-grit


  • #1557
    Android 666
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,577 ✭✭✭Android 666


    seannash wrote: »
    agree,nice track

    Yeah. Really enjoyed that. Nice work.


  • #1558
    Android 666
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,577 ✭✭✭Android 666


    lazyatom wrote: »
    posted a new track, Reactor No 2, up on Soundcloud if anyone wants to have a listen. probably the most effort i've ever put into a track in some mad attempt to create a track that is less like my normal stuff, and more... Berghain-ish, and failing so totally and utterly.

    http://soundcloud.com/lustbader/reactor-no-2-siren-song-mix

    another ambient discordant intro and layers and layers of sounds leading up to the inevitable last third crescendo i have been desperately trying to avoid.

    spent like, f•cking AAAAAAAGES tweaking every sound to get stuff jump out or hide down in the mix, and freaking days structuring the bloody thing.

    kinda proud of it but utterly hate it too.

    so, uh, yeah... have a listen if you want to waste, like, fifteen minutes of your life. i mean, fifteen minutes??? wtf was i thinking? i can't seem to get any tune of mine in under 8 mins, let alone make a radio friendly choon.

    any feedback would be welcome. even a genre placement would help...

    I really enjoyed this lazy - it's a real journey track. I think it would really help if you gave the drums a bit more depth, make them more cavernous in places but it's a cool track, love the siren and alarm effects.


  • #1559
    Android 666
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,577 ✭✭✭Android 666


    AfroSonic wrote: »
    Howdy... first track up - http://soundcloud.com/afrosonic/oscillate

    Chillout type feel to it. Not much post production work done to it so feedback and suggestions welcome.

    Cheers.

    I think it's too fast for a chillout piece so I'd either bring down the bpm to about 80-90 or bring it up slightly and make the drums a bit heavier and louder and make more of a housey track.


  • #1560
    Android 666
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,577 ✭✭✭Android 666


    Okay, two new tracks I've been working on. One's kind of a chilled out garage thing:

    http://soundcloud.com/four-bear/bliss-is-adrift

    And the other is more of a house number:

    http://soundcloud.com/android-78/swimming-lesson

    Feedback as always is appreciated.


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  • #1561
    seannash
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 5,665 ✭✭✭seannash


    Android 666 wrote: »

    http://soundcloud.com/android-78/swimming-lesson

    Feedback as always is appreciated.
    Think just throwing in a more prominent snare here and there might help everything


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