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A mirror by day - thgin yb rorrim a

ctrl-alt-delete · 2005-08-03 00:03:23

A mirror by day – thgin yb rorrim a When I look at you do I see myself? – ?ees ot eviecrep uoy od ohw os fi dna Brightness shining enlightens my vague view – ytitne ym srits ssenkrad gninefaed Only I as myself can answer what I ask – nruter ym noitseuq nac flesruoy sa uoy ylno Twilight twists and turns my eager estimation…

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#32 28-08-2005 7:31pm
jimmidy_cricket

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Thanx Phil, Wow, I have to say I love alliteration, gets me every time but even the words you choose go so well together silence creeps through the open window, I dunno bout anyone else but I could really picture a little creature making his way through a small bathroom window, the cold air rushing past him. I think thats the measure of a good piece when the reader has a vivid image in their mind.Well done and very creative writing it backwards but I did loose loads of it so thanks again for writing it normal its great.

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