Requesting feedback for a game jam demo.

Torakx

Hey folks
Some friends of mine have a top down shooter demo, made for a 1 month game jam.
I said I would see if I can find some testers for feedback, as they are unsure on the level it is at already and if it's worth continuing as a comercial idea or just move on and keep learning with new ideas.
Heres the link to the game, it's on my friends portfolio site.

http://www.kevinmurphygames.com/teluma

Any feedback here, I can also relay over to them. I am curious myself what others think.
Thanks

witnessmenow

I'll take a look this evening If I get a chance, good luck with it!

It's feedback Friday on r/gameDev on reddit, you should post it up there too

Torakx

Thanks
And for the Reddit tip. I never really used that site. Only when it came upon google searches for coding issues.
I'l see if I can register today and post something
Edit:
Now I know why I haven't joined that site.I find that sites theme makes it near impossible to read text. I have issues with numbers and letters visually and that background/theme does not help lol
It's like my eyes won't hold to the text ^^ You can see here on boards the border between posts. That really helps me to read.
Maybe too much going on visually, or not enough contrast. I might give that one a miss
My friends can join if they need the feedback that much hehe.
Thanks for the tip though.

RedXIV

You could try codereddit.com if it helps keeps you in the right frame of mind too

Torakx

Oh god, that is a nightmare hahaha
That is why I stopped coding and switched to art instead :P