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  • #32
    Insect Overlord
    Moderators, Social & Fun Moderators, Society & Culture Moderators Posts: 31,034 Mod ✭✭✭✭Insect Overlord


    Mario007 wrote: »
    see thats when poetry becomes boring, when you "have to" answer all these question, how about a bit of randomness and funnyness:D i mean surprise is always the best element to use:D

    I agree that one should never feel bored when they are writing poetry. However, if the poem is not complete, generic and vague attempts at humour ("funnyness") and caprice ("randomness") are poor substitutes for a well-crafted piece of art.
    Surprise is only the best element to use in an ambush.
    Mario007 wrote: »
    to be honest i never really was a good one for redrafting, plus i like it this way and its not like i wanna get it to like poetry magazines or something, they'd probably find it inappripriate:(:D

    You'd be surprised at what makes it into poetry magazines! ;)
    I've only ever had two poems published, but I still put all my work through several re-drafts until I'm completely satisfied.

    To be brutally honest, your poem does not make sense as it is written now. You've left too much up to the reader (i.e. the questions I posted yesterday). Claiming you don't want the piece to be published is a redundant argument, as you put it on a message board for the world to see.


  • #33
    sMacktardism
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16 ✭sMacktardism


    Matt Holck wrote: »
    due to lachk of composition

    Ya to be honest i hate it when poetry 'lachk's compostion.
    O deary me matt. :pac:nom nom nom


  • #34
    sMacktardism
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16 ✭sMacktardism


    'Penis jokes are funny, yet penis poems are funnier, therefor ye talented Mario, write on'
    -john keats


  • #35
    Insect Overlord
    Moderators, Social & Fun Moderators, Society & Culture Moderators Posts: 31,034 Mod ✭✭✭✭Insect Overlord


    sMacktardism wrote: »
    Ya to be honest i hate it when poetry 'lachk's compostion.
    O deary me matt. :pac:nom nom nom
    sMacktardism wrote: »
    'Penis jokes are funny, yet penis poems are funnier, therefor ye talented Mario, write on'
    -john keats

    Does anybody else get the feeling that this troll is an alternate account created by the OP?


  • #36
    sMacktardism
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16 ✭sMacktardism


    Did your mother never tell you to not feed the troll?
    My good man, you are way over thinking this. Why the hell would OP open a h4x account to defend a poem he posted on the internet powerhouse that is boards?
    And defend it badly at that. Opinion = nom nom nom


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  • #37
    Mario007
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 877 ✭✭✭Mario007


    sMacktardism wrote: »
    'Penis jokes are funny, yet penis poems are funnier, therefor ye talented Mario, write on'
    -john keats

    ha brilliant! go john keats...now he was a poet, not like any of the new modern poetry thats all about how your parents dont love you or how you're a great lesbian and hate men:D

    i also must agree with sMacktardism, why the hell would i go to extreme lengths to defend a poem on internet forums:D

    oh an file i do respect your opinion, but i didn't write this to be a piece of art but to take the piss out of poetry and create something funny...no poetry issues about alliteration or assonence or anything like that are to be applied:D


  • #38
    Sarky
    Closed Accounts Posts: 31,967 ✭✭✭✭Sarky


    *sigh*


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