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sneakartgirl · 22-04-2007 06:15PM #1

when i slept in his arms that night i know he felt the same as i did. I could feel his fast, strong heart beat against my chest as he pretended to be asleep.

It kills me now that i think ive lost that with him, that although we've been friends for 8 months, ive put on weight and i think hes lost the attraction he had towards me, but then when i sometimes catch him looking at me and quickly looking away im not so sure...

Dave! · 22-04-2007 06:20PM

what the f*ck is this crap?

aidan_walsh · 22-04-2007 06:22PM

So Glad · 22-04-2007 06:22PM

DaveMcG wrote:

what the f*ck is this crap?

HAHAHA

brianthebard · 22-04-2007 06:23PM

DaveMcG wrote:

what the f*ck is this crap?

Indeed.

sneakartgirl · 22-04-2007 06:24PM

Mossy Monk · 22-04-2007 06:25PM

DaveMcG wrote:

what the f*ck is this crap?

I think you answered your own question.

sneakartgirl · 22-04-2007 06:25PM

never mind then...

God.

22-04-2007 06:28PM

He's obviously cheating on you. Dump him and go travelling.

kaimera · 22-04-2007 06:28PM

No no, continue with the story.

I assume the ... at the end meant you weren't finished?

Crucifix · 22-04-2007 06:29PM

PI? or Creative writing?

Dord · 22-04-2007 06:30PM

join a club or go see a doctor...

sneakartgirl · 22-04-2007 06:33PM

nah im not even in the mood anymore

some of you are retarded.

brianthebard · 22-04-2007 06:41PM

Four posts to begin insulting people! Must be a new record. sag(as I will from now on refer to the op) if you were to explain what the point of all this was then perhaps you would have a more receptive audience. Are you Icequeen?

connundrum · 22-04-2007 06:41PM

sneakartgirl wrote:

some of you are retarded.

ORLY?

Bollocks, can't believe I wasted my 2000th on this. Grrrr

So Glad · 22-04-2007 06:42PM

sneakartgirl wrote:

nah im not even in the mood anymore

some of you are retarded.

Ok, go on. You feel your husband/boyfriend has no feelings for you anymore? Or is avoiding any feeling?

biko · 22-04-2007 06:43PM

sneakartgirl wrote:

nah im not even in the mood anymore

some of you are retarded.

Go cry emo kid

humbert · 22-04-2007 06:45PM

Now, now, be fair to the poor girl. She's probably just going through that awkward pretentious emo phase.

22-04-2007 06:49PM

Sneakartgirl woke with a start. "Huh... what... Oh, it's just you."

"You must of been dreaming," he said, before rolling over to reach for his pack of fags and lighter.

"Smoking?" she mumbled. "I can see that things have changed."

"Huh?" he said through his smoke. "Wimmin!"

"There was a time when you didn't need a smoke after," she told the ceiling.

"What in the world are you talk'in about woman?"

"You don't love me anymore!" she rolls away from him, clutching her pillow, the first tear rolls down her face.

Steoob · 22-04-2007 06:54PM

his disobedience only heightened her space horniness even further

So Glad · 22-04-2007 07:00PM

Sneakartgirl wakes up in a haze, her life swirling into a dark abyss, only surpassed by her emotions.

What is this?

DARK

empty

lonely

.....

STOP!

But oh, I hang my head in shame, of how he looked at me, without feel, without emotion.....without me.

</thoughfulposeaccompaniedbyasolomntear>

Mossy Monk · 22-04-2007 07:02PM

sneakartgirl wrote:

nah im not even in the mood anymore

some of you are retarded.

Only some?

HammerHeadGym · 22-04-2007 07:03PM

So what are you into? she asks.

The usual, he responds. Beer, fags, football, one night stands with no strings attached.

Disgusting male chauvenist pigs ftw!!

Sofaspud · 22-04-2007 07:11PM

She gazed sorrowfully into his eyes.

"When will you men learn?" she asks, noticing the faraway glint in his eye.

"You can't continue like this, someday you'll learn, but until then, I'm afraid we are no more!"

She ran into the night, unsure of where she may end up, and whether or not she'd return . . .

Binomate · 22-04-2007 07:12PM

aidan_walsh wrote:

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c100/Oggie1226/emo.jpg

Fuck you!

I wanted to post that.

Uncomfortable with the chilling reaslisation she had come to she promptly leapt out of bed. Grabbing just her night gown, she ran down the stairs, out the door and got in to the car. She began to drive. She needed to get away from the chaos in her mind, she didn't care where she was going, so long as she was going. As the car came to a stop at the traffic lights she was startled by knock on the window. Frightened, she looked out the window to be confronted by a bewildered homeless man. "Yore tit is showin'. Give us a go will ye", he says.

Alter-Ego · 22-04-2007 07:16PM

*Waits for thread to be locked*

stovelid · 22-04-2007 07:23PM

connundrum wrote:

ORLY?

Bollocks, can't believe I wasted my 2000th on this. Grrrr

2001st, don't worry

Binomate wrote:

Uncomfortable with the chilling reaslisation she had come to she promptly leapt out of bed. Grabbing just her night gown, she ran down the stairs, out the door and got in to the car. She began to drive. She needed to get away from the chaos in her mind, she didn't care where she was going, so long as she was going. As the car came to a stop at the traffic lights she was startled by knock on the window. Frightened, she looked out the window to be confronted by a bewildered homeless man. "Yore tit is showin'. Give us a go will ye", he says.

roffle

Nehpets · 22-04-2007 07:56PM

Binomate wrote:

Fuck you!

I wanted to post that.

Uncomfortable with the chilling reaslisation she had come to she promptly leapt out of bed. Grabbing just her night gown, she ran down the stairs, out the door and got in to the car. She began to drive. She needed to get away from the chaos in her mind, she didn't care where she was going, so long as she was going. As the car came to a stop at the traffic lights she was startled by knock on the window. Frightened, she looked out the window to be confronted by a bewildered homeless man. "Yore tit is showin'. Give us a go will ye", he says.

Her foot hit the accelerater and soon she was alone again. She felt relatively safe. As she pondered over what had just happened and over the past few years leading up to all this, she noticed that her fingernail was chipped. This was the last thing she thought of.

Another car screeched to a halt. The driver, a man in his mid thirties, had witnessed what just happened. He rang for help. Stumbling on words he explained what he just saw. He didn't need to try remember, the event was running through his head as clear as high definition TV. He could see the car spinning after it clipped the curb. It reminded him of a film he once saw, but couldn't remember the name. He explained to the emergency services that it was a woman driver. He hadn't got out of his car to check, but the bad driving gave it away.

So Glad · 22-04-2007 08:05PM

Nehpets wrote:

Her foot hit the accelerater and soon she was alone again. She felt relatively safe. As she pondered over what had just happened and over the past few years leading up to all this, she noticed that her fingernail was chipped. This was the last thing she thought of.

Another car screeched to a halt. The driver, a man in his mid thirties, had witnessed what just happened. He rang for help. Stumbling on words he explained what he just saw. He didn't need to try remember, the event was running through his head as clear as high definition TV. He could see the car spinning after it clipped the curb. It reminded him of a film he once saw, but couldn't remember the name. He explained to the emergency services that it was a woman driver. He hadn't got out of his car to check, but the bad driving gave it away.

Although it pained her to view these realizations, one thing was true...

The pain never lied.

All these years a mimicry of the lesser, but O.....how they matter, they matter, but you can try telling people that, through the shade of an umbrella during the damp month of December, where frowns are the casual fashion, and tears are nobodies long lost friend...

But I pause, and grasp for breath.

Although, I know, this breath is borrowed.....

Dudess · 23-04-2007 02:05PM

How this thread is making me lol!

OP, you're just so deep...

FlutterinBantam · 23-04-2007 02:14PM

What's this crap all about????

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