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Chapter 2 - my way ; )

  • 10-04-2000 02:17PM
    #1
    Moderators, Social & Fun Moderators Posts: 28,633 Mod ✭✭✭✭


    OK, here's Chapter 2 of my ickle story. Chapter 1 can be seen hee towards the bottom of the page.

    Enjoy...

    In the begining...

    A week had passed since the incident and Jim’s girlfriend, Sarah, had noticed changes in her boyfriend’s behaviour. Putting it down to shock of the mirror incident, she thought it would just be a phase that Jim would come out of when he was ready. Besides, she didn’t really need him. She always had Christine to satisfy her needs. At one point, Sarah was suspicious that Jim had found out about her love affair with her life long friend, but when she raised the subject he didn’t act as if he knew anything.

    “I’m off over to Christine’s place to study hun!”

    “OK, see you later”

    Puunack rose from the chair and watched as Sarah drove off to the other side of town. The wings under his skin unfolded as he left the house through the back door and he took off. Once he was sure he was high enough not to be spotted, he flew in the direction of Christine’s flat. His enhanced vision was clearly able to see Sarah and Christine embrace as soon as the door was opened. Puunack couldn’t understand why he felt he had to see this, but something compelled him to do it.

    Landing silently on the roof, he summoned a spell if seeing and a window was created that allowed him to see directly into the flat. Becoming enraged with what he saw (although not entirely sure why), he smashed his fist through the roof and dropped down beside the two terrorised lovers…

    **********

    “I’ve no idea either Mick.” said Sergeant Peter Walsh

    “It sure as hell isn’t pretty Pete. They still haven’t found the heads.” whispered his counter-part, Michael Fitzgerald.

    In the 12 years they’d both shared as Gardaí, neither man had seen anything like the carnage and amount of blood left after this attack.

    “I think it’s safe to say, we’re in way over our heads Mick.”

    “Time to make the call?”

    “Yeah.”

    Back at the station house, Sergeant Walsh nervously picked up the phone.

    “I heard all about it and have been expecting your call Sergeant.”

    “Can you help?”

    “I’m not sure, it already be may be that the creature has grown sufficiently to be able to oppose anything we could do to stop it.”

    “Can’t you use a crucifix or silver bullets or something?!?”

    “This isn’t one of those television series that men everywhere adore because of the leading actress’, talents. This is reality. However, I may know someone that can help. Wait for my call in one hour.”

    “I’ll talk…” but the line was already dead.

    “Would you like to explain what the hell that was all about?”

    “I’m sorry Garda Mullins, are sergeants supposed to report to you now?”

    Realising his mistake and seeing the raw anger in his superior’s eyes, Eugene Mullins quickly apologised and found something better to do.

    “If he find’s out, there’s gonna be trouble.”

    **********

    No one knew his name – he didn’t know it himself. All he knew was a life of solitude and meditation. He knew that his time was coming – a dream told him so. Strangely, this was the only aspect of his dream he could remember. He usually remembered more as he had trained himself to do so. While this was troubling for him, he didn’t let it distract him too much as he now had too much work to do.

    Still, he sat at his screen, updating the various worms he had around the Internet, making sure his bank balances were in order. He needed to buy firearms and fast. No one had ever told him how to do it, he just knew. At first the sensation of typing line after line of code which he understood nothing of felt frightening. However, when the first interest cheque arrived to his hut, he didn’t let it worry him any more.

    Glancing around the room, he saw the faces of old friends and enemies. He felt a kind of sorrow when he did this, but he did it none the less. He was the last of a special breed and he knew his end was coming soon. A tear glistened in his one human eye as he returned to his finances. He had to find the contact soon or it would all have been for nothing.

    **********


    All the best,

    Dav
    @B^)
    http://homepage.eircom.net/~davitt


Comments

  • Closed Accounts Posts: 890 ✭✭✭Wyverne


    Woh; bloody brilliant

    i see we both intend going for the 'carnage' tyoe story. but they still seem to be going off in different directions,

    kewl chapter m8, very kewl

    im well impressed.

    smile.gif


  • Moderators, Social & Fun Moderators Posts: 28,633 Mod ✭✭✭✭Shiminay


    Cheers dude smile.gif


    The next chapter's already underway, but I've got work to do first!!! wink.gif



    All the best,

    Dav
    @B^)
    http://homepage.eircom.net/~davitt


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 768 ✭✭✭SHADOW


    **********************
    In a building buried deep in the countryside a phone began to shrill with an uncanny violence, shattering the up till then absolute silence. Madrak stood slowly from his crouched position half a mile away from his lodge. While he could not hear the phone ringing his gift told him it was. In an instant he was tearing through the dense forest at speed nearing the sound barrier. His phone NEVER rang, except for when...

    Hello..

    Madrake, we need to talk, theres been another incident.....

    I thought that all the...

    So did I, but our police contact phoned, also its on the news.

    Where do you want to meet?

    The usual place in a half an hour.

    With that the phone went dead.
    **********************************

    "Sh!t" he thought, thats enough for one nite. He had ensured that his cash stream was still turning in the money. He now had currency coming form 64 different countries.
    In about two weeks I'll be ready, he thought.

    Flicking on his TV, he switched straight to the news. It had become kind of like a routine, searching news publications for a clue where his contact mite lie.

    "At a house in west Dublin today two lesbian lovers heads where torn from their bodies. The Gardai have yet to release a statement..." , the news-caster read.

    At once what had been an exahsted body was charged with electrical enery. Fuk he thought...
    **************************

    smile.gif
    Well whatya think?
    Decided to pitch in with a version of me own!!
    wink.gif

    N


  • Moderators, Social & Fun Moderators Posts: 28,633 Mod ✭✭✭✭Shiminay


    G'wan the Neil!

    Nicely done man. I was gonna head in a similar way ya fupp. You stole that idea from my head - I know you did! wink.gif

    My chapter 3 soon...



    All the best,

    Dav
    @B^)
    http://homepage.eircom.net/~davitt


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 768 ✭✭✭SHADOW


    Actually Dav m8
    I need to talk to ya
    Will ya either gis a shout on irc or pop down on Fri nite...
    wink.gif
    Cheers m8


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  • Moderators, Social & Fun Moderators Posts: 28,633 Mod ✭✭✭✭Shiminay


    Won't be around on Friday night. U gonna be in Rathmines any other night? Mail me - davitt@eircom.net



    All the best,

    Dav
    @B^)
    http://homepage.eircom.net/~davitt


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 1,219 ✭✭✭plastic membrane


    Hey Dav, this is my oppertunity to promote our fantasic, unbelievable, astounding, and lets face it, silly as hell film. this film folks is currently in pre-production stage, ie im writing the screenplay as soon as my exams are over. but anyhoo, this is gist of it:



  • Closed Accounts Posts: 1,219 ✭✭✭plastic membrane


    Hey Dav, this is my oppertunity to promote our fantasic, unbelievable, astounding, and lets face it, silly as hell film. this film folks is currently in pre-production stage, ie im writing the screenplay as soon as my exams are over. but anyhoo, this is gist of it: THE BREAFFY DITCH PROJECT
    In January of 2000, three stoned
    out filmmakers fell into a ditch
    on the side of the road near
    Castlebar, Co Mayo....
    one hour later...they got out

    Coming soon to a bootlegger of crappy quality videos near you! The Breaffy Ditch Project. Its Aitrplane meets that really cool roulette sequence in the Deer Hunter meets that thing about the witch! WOOHOO



    Everything is say is enough to make me die, i close my eyes and wish i could fly
    i wish i could sto talking tripe
    i wish i could talk like i type


  • Moderators, Social & Fun Moderators Posts: 28,633 Mod ✭✭✭✭Shiminay


    heeheehee, 'WAN DA BREAFFY DITCH PROJECT!!!

    What about the Death Metal Chéilí Band?

    To those who don't know, plastic membrane was there the night the Beefy Kings (inspiration to this story) were invented. Expect some more weirdness soon.



    All the best,

    Dav
    @B^)
    http://homepage.eircom.net/~davitt


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 1,219 ✭✭✭plastic membrane


    CHECK OUT THE DEATH METAL CEILI BAND, WITH THEIR NEW ALBUM "LETS BITE THE HEAD OFF THE BODHRAIN PLAYER". Including such hits as

    Rudolph The Red Nosed Headbanger
    Satan Told Me To Kill The English Infadels
    Emmigrating To Hell
    Poitin Piledrivers
    Aran Island Mosh Pit Grannies
    Wait And Bleed The Radiator Pipes
    ****in' Peig Sayers
    Dancing At The Crossroads With Dev's Corpse
    I Committed Mt Soul To The Dark Lord The Day The Pope Came
    and the all time classic:
    Daniel O Donnell:Misunderstood Minion Of Death Metal

    All coming soon on Witchfinder General Records


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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 746 ✭✭✭whitetrash


    couldn't u just post it in ur web-page and then just TELL us a new chapter is there?

    ch2 is v.good btw, how many are u planning on doing?

    try http://www3.sympatico.ca/konrad.olen/stories.html
    for some short horror stories

    "**** the sexy gestapo with their tight leather trousers and luxurious blonde hair"
    wHiTe-TrAsH.cjb.net


  • Moderators, Social & Fun Moderators Posts: 28,633 Mod ✭✭✭✭Shiminay


    I dunno how many I'll do - as many as it takes I s'pose. I will put the lot on my website (soonish) and let you get it from there.

    Thanks for the comments smile.gif



    All the best,

    Dav
    @B^)
    http://homepage.eircom.net/~davitt


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