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Remember Beatrix?

  • 21-10-2004 09:25PM
    #1
    Closed Accounts Posts: 20


    I don't know how many of you might remember my poetry but anyway, I was called Beatrix on these boards but opted for a different name. Here's my part two thread to "Clingfilm Poetry" ... it's quite different to the old poems. I think.


    Dedication to Sufferers

    It is easy to complain
    About the misfortunes
    That befall us -
    But we never think of
    Those who suffered more
    And never caused a fuss.

    We paint ourselves in colours
    That are fake and bleed
    Together in the rain -
    But there are some who
    Do not paint - they highlight
    What is there again.

    There are endless bibliographies
    In multitudinous bookstores
    Telling many brave "true" stories -
    And there are many people
    Never written in books
    Who can truly say They know what Glory is.


Comments

  • Closed Accounts Posts: 20 Lilliput Girl


    I sit alone here
    Listening to noises
    Keyboard clicks
    Much coughing
    And loneliness.

    Phone rings.
    It is not mine
    And shall not be
    For a while -
    I am a face
    Among my ghost friends.

    I must find tears
    To vent my sorrows
    But they will not come
    Like friend hugs
    They are gone.
    Once the sun shone.


  • Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    Beatrix! I wondered many times what happened to you, so glad to see you back ;)
    and very well done , once again :D


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 20 Lilliput Girl


    Walking blur
    Of lights and
    Moving creatures
    Like bright stars
    Dancing on a lake-
    I plunge amid
    Them, semi-blind
    And fully quiet-
    I pretend I am
    A tiny worm
    Unnoticeable
    And small
    But doing my tall
    Bit for mother nature-
    Blind, inconspicuous
    But aren't we all?


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 408 ✭✭shiv


    I like your last one best, Beatrix
    The rhythm and slightly-off structure works very well
    You should post them individually though, so we don't miss any!! :)


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 20 Lilliput Girl


    Thank you. It's been a while since I wrote poetry... So I'm out of practise.


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 408 ✭✭shiv


    The only way to get back into it is to write more, even if it's ****e at first, just get writing ;)


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 343 ✭✭parker larkin


    very true shiv, advice I must take myself.
    Lili, your last piece is the most interesting and well written. Good on ya :)


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 20 Lilliput Girl


    I want to dance in stripey coloured jumpers
    In the Summer... in the hay.
    I want the sunset to blind me
    Like it did when I was five.
    I want to be surprised again
    When, holding baby frogs within my palm,
    I bubble laughter.
    I want to make "wheat soup" in
    Daddy's horse buckets.

    But now I'm a little older I have older dreams-
    Now I want to dance upon the moon
    If I want to dash down rainy streets in
    Skirt and tights I surely may.
    I want to hold my friends' hands and kiss their
    Cheeks amid happy tears.
    I want to give them gifts that they have never owned.
    I want to be a child that has been blessed
    With adulthood-my wish is gold


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 408 ✭✭shiv


    Charming lilliput :)
    Great imagery


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