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    #32
    ScumLord
    Registered Users Posts: 28,789 ✭✭✭✭ScumLord


    Reoil wrote: »
    When I look at a photograph, I don't want to immediately think - "What am I supposed to be look at?".
    The man is the focus of the photograph. The cables are a distraction. For me.
    I think the man, sitting in a first story window, would suggest "urban".
    I don't think the outside electric infrastructure would add to tell a story.
    Just my opinion.
    All the cables immediately make me think of Spain so to me, he's gone from a guy sitting in a window in some part of the world, to maybe a guy on holiday in Spain.


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    #33
    PhoenixParker
    Registered Users Posts: 2,677 ✭✭✭PhoenixParker


    I don't think the cables take from the picture, as others have said they give it a sense of place.
    I think the top of the overhang above the guy in the window is distracting. There's a narrow line there that's pulling focus, but I think the widescreen is cutting too low.

    This is my crop matching original proportions.

    a2lpD9W.jpg


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