anyone care to hazzard a guess as to what this is about

deepriver

I wrote this recently any feedback welcome

floating deck-chair on grassy clouds
willow sentry at the border
midday-sun lends no shadow
the smile of somthing once happy
the faded print stirs a distant memory

Inter

deepriver wrote: »

I wrote this recently any feedback welcome

floating deck-chair on grassy clouds
willow sentry at the border
midday-sun lends no shadow
the smile of somthing once happy
the faded print stirs a distant memory

Looks like the rejected verse from Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds to me

Actually I like it, really. It sends messages of nostalgia, of the passage of time and how all our best times seem to be behind us.

Matt Holck

moving spots behind the iris from squinting at the sun

deepriver

...sepia-tinted and sweet-scattered recollections

thanks for the comments Inter

Inter

You're welcome, mate

Matt Holck

thanks for ignoring me

Inter

You're welcome, too, Matt

deepriver

deepriver wrote: »

...sepia-tinted and sweet-scattered recollections

that was a follow on to your contribution Matt