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26-09-2015 4:07amForever you.
it was dark with just a small shadow of light
the reflection from the window meant you were beside me
it was silent, cold and tragic but i clung on
i felt your fingertips slowly burning down my spine
but as usual you were gone
chorus
don't wake up so peaceful and still you look
and for the last time i closed the door and behind it was
was the times i am leaving behind.
and now I'm living with dora and she’s ok
but she isn't you and the jumper she wears
smells alien and strange and i just can't get used to
not being with you
the time in the park, the time cycling through forests
my eyes by now just steeped in memories
and just a glimpse is all i need to make me go weak from crumbling knees
the world could shatter and grow old but my love for you just never grows cold.
chorus
don't wake up so peaceful and still you look
and for the last time i closed the door and behind it was
was the times i am leaving behind.
they said it would pass, but here in darkness it just grows old.
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Im not musically inclined sadly but i do enjoy writing lyrics.0
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The murder of Sarah Coins
it was only her eighteenth winter and three children under her
not hers but now cast as mother and whore
during the day, full of love, full of warmth but at night out to the icy decaying streets
and one night November seventeenth she wouldn't be coming home
Chorus
Pigeon faced people smirked and in hush tones spoke and falsely proclaimed god bless Sarah Coins and never again will she have to open her legs, the wounds of life have been replaced with death.
he was handsome and with a scar running down the left cheek of his face
he summoned her to his car and in she got and off they drove
he brought her to an abandoned house out in dark fields afar
and when he produced the knife not a sound did Sarah Coin make
she knew the imagery and she knew the ending
Chorus
Pigeon faced people smirked and in hush tones spoke and falsely proclaimed god bless Sarah Coins and never again will she have to open her legs, the wounds of life have been replaced with death.
she is drenched in sun now and drenched in sand
back into the warm arms of her dead mother she is now
and all the cold people go back to work
never understanding the sufferings of Sarah Coins
deep in hers eyes and far in her soul
Sarah Coins has blossomed in time, full of life and mystical charms
she lays in flowers on a bed of gold
Chorus
Pigeon faced people smirked and in hush tones spoke and falsely proclaimed god bless Sarah Coins and never again will she have to open her legs, the wounds of life have been replaced with death.0 -
Bit of work on these and you could have something really good but to be honest for me they don't read like lyrics but they could with a bit of tidying up on the lines so they flow better, in parts they both have that haunting feel to them so i would say just keep the words that your lyric line needs and less of the word for word guide.
Just my thoughts on both.0 -
Matias Dazzling Sodium wrote: »Bit of work on these and you could have something really good but to be honest for me they don't read like lyrics but they could with a bit of tidying up on the lines so they flow better, in parts they both have that haunting feel to them so i would say just keep the words that your lyric line needs and less of the word for word guide.
Just my thoughts on both.
Thanks for the feedback. I know the flow is wrong so will work at making them flow better.0 -
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The murder of Sarah Coins
Her eighteenth winter and three children to care for
Cast as mother and whore
Full of love, full of warmth but at night to the cold streets she took
and November seventeenth she won’t be coming home
Chorus
Pigeon faced they smirked and quietly spoke
Said god bless Sarah Coins
Never again to open her legs
Her wounds of life
Now replaced with death
Handsome and tall
A long scar runs deep into him
Summoned her to his car
In she got and off they drove
An abandoned field he took her
Far from where she is from
A knife produced and not a sound from Sarah coins
Fate accepted from his gruesome touch
The end she embraced
Chorus
Pigeon faced they smirked and quietly spoke
Said god bless Sarah Coins
Never again to open her legs
Her wounds of life
Now replaced with death
Lying in sand and drenched in gold
Her dead mother’s arms she falls backwards towards
Back to work they heave
Never to understand Sarah’s grief
In her eyes and in her soul
Sarah coins has blossomed in afterlife
On a field of flowers in a bed of gold she now lays
Chorus
Pigeon faced they smirked and quietly spoke
Said god bless Sarah Coins
Never again to open her legs
Her wounds of life
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Revised
Forever young
In a dark bed just a small shadow of light
A reflection of you beside me
Silent, cold and tragic I still clung
Your fingertips slowly burning through my spine
As usual you were gone
Chorus
So peaceful and still you look
For the last time I close the door
The times we shared I’m leaving behind
And now I’m staying with Dora
She isn’t you
Her jumper smells strange and alien
Her scent I can’t get lost into
your scent still lingers on
Chorus
So peaceful and still you look
For the last time I close the door
The times we shared I’m leaving behind
A walk in the park, a cycle in the forest
My eyes seeping in our memories
A glimpse is all it takes
To make my knees crumbling and weak
And the world may shatter and I grow old
But the love we shared refuses to grow cold
Chorus
So peaceful and still you look
For the last time I close the door
The times we shared I’m leaving behind
They said it would pass, but in darkness here alone it just grows old.0 -
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Shadow boxer
In the bottle he lived
His bible recited daily
His stale breath down her imaginary neck
Crawling towards his own madness
Painted his walls white
At night to become his greatest opponent
A reflection of spit and tears
A mirror he cannot bear to reflect
He reclines and they call his name
His reflection in a bottle of pale
Anything not to think
His swollen lips red and blue
A result of a life in slow decay
Chorus
Punching holes and skipping free
Shadow boxer on his heels
His movement fine and his head is free
Shadow boxer for no one to see
Morning is worse when the snakes set free
Tormenting his every thought
Knuckles bruised and cello taped
A pain at least he sees
A bathroom of white tiles
Mixed with blood and sweat
An unused bath soaks his sins
A collapsed lung a self-inflicted rule
Chorus
Punching holes and skipping free
Shadow boxer on his heels
His movement fine and his head is free
Shadow boxer for no one to see0 -
You know when i first read your work i got a strong sense of spoken word poetry, kind of like a stage presence characterizing the depths of what's going on within your words and at times powerful imagery coming from the way you write which is always a great weapon to have as a writer, but i do think you should (if you haven't done it already) record yourself (spoken word poetry) become the navigator of your own words and when recorded listen back, just to see what you hear, i also think you got a Tom Waits style in the way you write.
I like Shadow Boxer reminds me of a wino from years back harmless soul but when drunk sometimes would be seen doing his shadow boxing routine, you got some good twist and turns in your words which reads like there could be an interesting flow there and at the moment i don't see anything needs to be change, so if its okay with you i like to give Shadow Boxer a try and see what i can come up with just acoustic and vocals, if not that's okay, keep writing.0 -
Matias Dazzling Sodium wrote: »You know when i first read your work i got a strong sense of spoken word poetry, kind of like a stage presence characterizing the depths of what's going on within your words and at times powerful imagery coming from the way you write which is always a great weapon to have as a writer, but i do think you should (if you haven't done it already) record yourself (spoken word poetry) become the navigator of your own words and when recorded listen back, just to see what you hear, i also think you got a Tom Waits style in the way you write.
I like Shadow Boxer reminds me of a wino from years back harmless soul but when drunk sometimes would be seen doing his shadow boxing routine, you got some good twist and turns in your words which reads like there could be an interesting flow there and at the moment i don't see anything needs to be change, so if its okay with you i like to give Shadow Boxer a try and see what i can come up with just acoustic and vocals, if not that's okay, keep writing.
That would be awesome man work away would love to hear that!
Thanks a lot and yes know what you mean a lot of it is more poetic than lyrics but if Mods don't mind i would like to add more stuff to this thread just to see where it goes I'm not taking it seriously just a hobby i like.
Thanks for your feedback and help very much appreciated.0 -
Sorry didn't mean to indicate you move to poetry didn't even know there was a poetry section here, i have your lyrics in front of me and going to see what kind of melody and vocal way i can put to them i think i already found a way for the chorus so hopefully we're half way there, interesting journey ahead for me and these lyrics of yours, thanks and talk soon.0
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Matias Dazzling Sodium wrote: »Sorry didn't mean to indicate you move to poetry didn't even know there was a poetry section here, i have your lyrics in front of me and going to see what kind of melody and vocal way i can put to them i think i already found a way for the chorus so hopefully we're half way there, interesting journey ahead for me and these lyrics of yours, thanks and talk soon.
Thats pretty cool thanks.
Nah its all good i know its probably more suited to poetry but I'm not that interested in poetry love music though, Its an amazing thing to hear a song that can capture the worlds attention even briefly.
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The aftermath hotel
She broke all the furniture
Neatly stacked it in the centre
Just like he did to her
Heartbroken, deconstructed
Just smoke now circles her eyes
Leaving her bloodshot and blind
John, he drove his convertible into a wall
With a pliers pulled his teeth one by one
Shaved his head with a blunt knife
Felt alive and felt alright
Poor Billy left alone since the age of five
Hasn’t spoken since they labelled him dumb
Planning a fiasco with a mind of cement
One day he knows he will be on all the TV shows
And the hotel of the aftermath orchestra play
And the audience dance and demand some more
The strings ache and the trumpets roar
It’s always, always for more, more, more
And she in 504
She hasn’t even begun to get up of the floor
Unwashed and naked in sight
stained underwear the only reminder of the men who remained out of sight
Now far too late to ask why
The floor opened and now she has died, at least inside
Poor old nettle feet
Red and blistered from head to heel
Shared his life for sixty years
She left with just a note
Out the widow and to the left
The bridge that keeps tripping people over
And the hotel of the aftermath orchestra play
And the audience dance and demand some more
The strings ache and the trumpets roar
It’s always, always for more, more, more
And me I’m just a fool on a desk
The phone never rings and the bell never pressed
I’m gonna get out of here one day
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Is this thread only for Ignatius in bloom to post his lyrics or are others allowed to?
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sryanbruen wrote: »Is this thread only for Ignatius in bloom to post his lyrics or are others allowed to?
I started the thread and you are more than welcome to post your lyrics, would love to see them.0 -
Purple
still i cling to a jacket that is gone
those eyes, they once searched in empty rooms for you
he touched my arm and it pierced my soul
you found a bed you felt alive in
found arms that felt like like your own
the fumes from the train as it pulled away
you coughed, you cried and you held on tight
to the notion that one day you will unite
now you’re on your balchony
its 6am, the sun is climbing over the banks of the river
it reminds you of a time in a bath both naked and exposed
and ashamed of nothing
he startles and touches your neck with his lips
he is someone new, he is someone ok
but your heart calls out for the boy on a train
and as he pulled away you knew, you just knew
stop tormenting my thoughts
the hold you have on me
is beautiful and you are forever
giving birth to my heart
they come and they go
they never stay, they all see in me that look
i have lost and the search is always for you
i lie awake and listen to the roar of the trains
closing my eyes silently, sadly, gladly as all i see is you
stop tormenting my thoughts
the hold you have on me
is beautiful and you are forever
giving birth to my heart
and now we’re old
and now we bathe
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Hate
Today i drew blood, hate needles
unless its heroin in its spine
ill bottle you in the face
ill bottle you in your pretty face
but its never me, its never me
alone i face these demons put in place
they crawl around my body
you won't even see their trace
i itch and i scratch
and ill know its wrong
but i know id knife you in the face
just to get to my place
here i sit in my place
people pass and look on in disgrace
i drew blood today and i never feel pain
i never feel anything
that is why ill knee you in the face
lock me up and call me scum
kick me in the head
makes no difference to me
my blanket smells of piss but my life smells of sh*t
I've no anger and no feelings of regret
i live up to expectations that your pretty faces expect
i don't need no bible no big stupid tv
my life is over consumed by a rusty needle
my eyes are yellow, it won't be long now
sleeping in my filth i can't even weep
and people pass by three days after i died
still in disgust and I'm something to hide.0 -
'Time Goes By' - a song I specially wrote about my baby sister who was born in March and how she filled the empty void in my heart which was caused by my nanny's death. It also says that my nanny sent her to us.
Time goes by
Every shot in the dark
Every dream must die
But I
Kept holding on
'Til the break of dawn
I knew you would come, oh baby
I prayed every night that maybe
My dream would come true
And yes it did
My life is full of passion
And the empty void in my heart
Has been filled
All because of you
Time goes by............
But as long as you are by my side
Life will be worth-while
Every morning you will see me with a smile
It'll be all because of you
Yeah it's true.........
You light up my world
I never knew a time
So full of promise
Good luck simply falling
Off the trees
Every day
Gets a little better
I hear you calling
I knew you would come, oh baby
I prayed every night that maybe
My dream would come true
And yes it did
My life is full of passion
And the empty void in my heart
Has been filled
All because of you
Time goes by............
But as long as you are by my side
Life will be worth-while
Every morning you will see me with a smile
It'll be all because of you
Yeah it's true.........
When I was young I used to go
To my room to listen to the radio
In those long gone days of times gone by
The songs that I heard made me laugh or cry
Night after night I lay alone
Caught the words through my headphones
Songs of joy and songs of pain
Songs to make me love again
And now that I am older and settled down
I play the old songs as I drive around
The songs that we used to sing
By the bus stop and in the rain
The times that I spent with you
Will always stay fresh and new
You will always live in me nanny
But time goes by and we need to move on
Thank god they sent another
So now my life will be recovered
Thanks to you....
Thanks to you....
Thanks to you....
Time goes by............
But as long as you are by my side
Life will be worth-while
Every morning you will see me with a smile
It'll be all because of you
Yeah it's true.........
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Never Give Up is my debut single and is on YouTube. My singing is horrible in it, so I am re-recording it with my friend soon who is a much better singer. Here are the lyrics anyways:
I'm pushing against the boundaries of everyday life
Watch me I'll be playing on that stage tonight
Inspiration can be, hard to find
Never give up, never give up
Life is full of mysteries out on the streets
But girl one day you could be just like me
Come rock the night and I'll give you, the key to
Never give up, never give up
All you have to do is never give up
You say, go away, you think it's tough
But all you have to do is never give up
The haters gonna hate, but you can break.... down that wall
If you never give up
Never give up
Never give up
Never give up
If you never give up
Now it's finally happened, my head is in a spin
Don't know which way to turn but I, won't give in
I recall a time when I dreamt I'd be here
Never give up, never give up
You know one day you will, fly free
Your spirit will soar high, above the trees
When that day's here, I'll be with you
Never give up, never give up
All you have to do is never give up
You say, go away, you think it's tough
But all you have to do is never give up
The haters gonna hate, but you can break.... down that wall
If you never give up
Never give up
Never give up
Never give up
If you never give up
[Instrumental]
All you have to do is never give up
You say, go away, you think it's tough
But all you have to do is never give up
The haters gonna hate, but you can break.... down that wall
If you never give up
Never give up
Never give up
Never give up
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I’m alone in the trenches
A rat runs over my severed foot,
Mud dried over my eyes,
The silence is a parade of darkness,
Running through my eyes
Chorus
Tell my love she is lucky I have not returned to her
Too many eyes, too many limbs too many souls rising from the ground
To my son who I never saw, I love you anyway
Remember me always as the boy before the man
My love I remember starting out with nothing
Every night cold until we lay together
Your eyes a book I could never finish
Now I lay here in fear and waiting until the heavens are clear
Teach our son about flowers and things that grow
Help him to understand that understanding is everything
The pigs of wars bring us slaves to their graves
Never a thought for all we have left behind
Chorus
Tell my love she is lucky I have not returned to her
Too many eyes, too many limbs too many souls rising from the ground
To my son who I never saw, I love you anyway
Remember me always as the boy before the man
The wetness of your lips I still taste
Standing in shallow pools of rain
You in white and me in black
We cemented our own faith
I carried you over the threshold
You will carry me beyond the gates
Chorus
Tell my love she is lucky I have not returned to her
Too many eyes, too many limbs too many souls rising from the ground
To my son who I never saw, I love you anyway
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sryanbruen wrote: »'Time Goes By' - a song I specially wrote about my baby sister who was born in March and how she filled the empty void in my heart which was caused by my nanny's death. It also says that my nanny sent her to us.
Time goes by
Every shot in the dark
Every dream must die
But I
Kept holding on
'Til the break of dawn
I knew you would come, oh baby
I prayed every night that maybe
My dream would come true
And yes it did
My life is full of passion
And the empty void in my heart
Has been filled
All because of you
Time goes by............
But as long as you are by my side
Life will be worth-while
Every morning you will see me with a smile
It'll be all because of you
Yeah it's true.........
You light up my world
I never knew a time
So full of promise
Good luck simply falling
Off the trees
Every day
Gets a little better
I hear you calling
I knew you would come, oh baby
I prayed every night that maybe
My dream would come true
And yes it did
My life is full of passion
And the empty void in my heart
Has been filled
All because of you
Time goes by............
But as long as you are by my side
Life will be worth-while
Every morning you will see me with a smile
It'll be all because of you
Yeah it's true.........
When I was young I used to go
To my room to listen to the radio
In those long gone days of times gone by
The songs that I heard made me laugh or cry
Night after night I lay alone
Caught the words through my headphones
Songs of joy and songs of pain
Songs to make me love again
And now that I am older and settled down
I play the old songs as I drive around
The songs that we used to sing
By the bus stop and in the rain
The times that I spent with you
Will always stay fresh and new
You will always live in me nanny
But time goes by and we need to move on
Thank god they sent another
So now my life will be recovered
Thanks to you....
Thanks to you....
Thanks to you....
Time goes by............
But as long as you are by my side
Life will be worth-while
Every morning you will see me with a smile
It'll be all because of you
Yeah it's true.........
And I wouldn't want it any other way
Like your first verse get you in there the rest reads fast like maybe rap, good lyrics obviously you have already put music to this would like to hear but if not then you should record really good lyrics, good luck to you.0 -
Matias Dazzling Sodium wrote: »Like your first verse get you in there the rest reads fast like maybe rap, good lyrics obviously you have already put music to this would like to hear but if not then you should record really good lyrics, good luck to you.
Only verse 3 {when I was young, I used to go.... etc} is rap until the thanks to you part which goes slower. Yes, I have put Music to it - though it hasn't been recorded because of my bad singing (I can't find a singer) and also I am setting up a recording studio. However, the Music alone without any vocals has been recorded so far! You can check out the Music here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=waf820eki3k
Here's a recording of me singing it (very badly I might add) here using the app Sing! Karaoke:
http://www.smule.com/recording/sryanbruen-time-goes-by/52152929_176539715
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This is a song I am currently still writing with my friend who will do the Guitar and my other friend who will sing the chorus whilst I rap the verses. Here is the composition of what I have so far - the site plays it for you
https://musescore.com/user/1724211/scores/1210321
Since this thread is "Lyrics": I guess I'll post the lyrics
There was a time when I dreamt
I'd see my guy but it went.. away
Like abandoned love, abandoned love
Oh how my heart wails across the world
All this time I thought I'd be your girl
But no our love was abandoned, abandoned love
All I ever asked for was a life where
Love would last forever, but no I guess I was wrong
Death punched me in the face and it wasn't fair
Just feels like home when you’re hugging my arm
Trusting that I’ll keep you safe from all harm
Look deep in my eyes now and you will see
Your love’s all the love that I need
Sadly, you had to go along
There is a feeling of loss and despair
And I feel like I’m not worthy to breathe this air
We know the depression and superstition are different things
Fall asleep every night thinking of living more days with you
Then I wake up in a bitter mood saying it was all a dream
But I know that you are better off up there
So all I can say is hold on and take care
There was a time when I dreamt
I'd see my guy but it went.. away
Like abandoned love, abandoned love
Oh how my heart wails across the world
All this time I thought I'd be your girl
But no our love was abandoned, abandoned love
Oh woah oh, oh woah oh
Woah oh oh
Oh woah oh, oh woah oh
Woah oh oh
Abandoned love
The day you left me was the day I died
Died on the inside, drowned in my own tears
And suddenly I was alone
No one to hold, no one at all
And I, I realized, I pushed you away
And I will try to, earn your love again
I just want you to return
Send you my prayers, my love
You slipped outta my fingers
I lost hold of my tight grip
I lost you once before, you were the one I adored
And I miss you every day
Don’t care how long you take, please come back to me
But I know that you are better off up there
So all I can say is hold on and take care
Sometimes the heart sees what's invisible to the eye
Home is where the heart is and you make my home
Time after time, I feel as though looking up to the sky
And say, will you ever come back one day?
Just please
There was a time when I dreamt
I'd see my guy but it went.. away
Like abandoned love, abandoned love
Oh how my heart wails across the world
All this time I thought I'd be your girl
But no our love was abandoned, abandoned love
Oh woah oh, oh woah oh
Woah oh oh
Abandoned love
Oh woah oh, oh woah oh
Woah oh oh
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[Verse 1]
When we were young
We walked all night
Through the streets of Madrid
Those days are gone
And you were right
I can't take back what I did
[Chorus]
You held my hand
I kiss your lips
We walked and talked together
But time is sand
We let it slip
Gently through our fingers
We became lovers in the streets of Madrid
Woah-oh oh oh oh I can't take back what I did
Woah-oh oh oh oh in the streets of Madrid
[Verse 2]
Now you are gone
And I am alone
I walk the night apart
I remember sun
And how you'd known
I would break your heart
[Chorus]
You held my hand
I kiss your lips
We walked and talked together
But time is sand
We let it slip
Gently through our fingers
We became lovers in the streets of Madrid
[Verse 3]
Never known so fine a day
All the clouds have blown away
I know why I feel so free
It's because you're here with me
Don't ever go I need you so
In sunshine and in darkness
I know our love will grow
[Chorus]
You held my hand
I kiss your lips
We walked and talked together
(Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah!)
But time is sand
We let it slip
Gently through our fingers
We became lovers in the streets of Madrid
Woah-oh oh oh oh I can't take back what I did
Woah-oh oh oh oh in the streets of Madrid
Woah-oh oh oh oh I can't take back what I did
Woah-oh oh oh oh in the streets of Madrid
[Outro]
Please stay with me till night
I need to know you love me
Woah-oh oh oh oh I can't take back what I did
Your face in the sun's dying light
Is the sight I want to see
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sryanbruen wrote: »Only verse 3 {when I was young, I used to go.... etc} is rap until the thanks to you part which goes slower. Yes, I have put Music to it - though it hasn't been recorded because of my bad singing (I can't find a singer) and also I am setting up a recording studio. However, the Music alone without any vocals has been recorded so far! You can check out the Music here:
Here's a recording of me singing it (very badly I might add) here using the app Sing! Karaoke:
Thank you very much!
Okay i listen to your music but i have to ask did you put that music together, if you did really good but if you didn't no worries still really good, okay when you find a singer you're seriously going to have to give that person the freedom to put his or her style to everything and i mean everything lyrics music atmosphere and can you explain to me why you cant find a singer, thanks.0 -
Matias Dazzling Sodium wrote: »Okay i listen to your music but i have to ask did you put that music together, if you did really good but if you didn't no worries still really good, okay when you find a singer you're seriously going to have to give that person the freedom to put his or her style to everything and i mean everything lyrics music atmosphere and can you explain to me why you cant find a singer, thanks.
I did put the music together - composed it because I keep posting on social sites to find a singer and they take the piss out of me saying they're a singer when they're not and thus want to make my Music look stupid and annoying.Photography site - https://www.sryanbruenphoto.com/
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sryanbruen wrote: »I did put the music together - composed it because I keep posting on social sites to find a singer and they take the piss out of me saying they're a singer when they're not and thus want to make my Music look stupid and annoying.
One thing for sure you definitely have talent, post on other songwriters sites and get to know other members you will find there are many from Ireland, one site is reverbnation and when you sign up giving your local area you will see many from Ireland there.
Dont bother with those social sites just stick with the sites where you'll find talent like yourself, keep writing and keep making beautiful music and the main thing is, enjoy.0 -
How's this piece by me?
https://musescore.com/user/1724211/scores/845856
You shy away, when I come close
Too afraid, of affection
Let me in, so I can see
The damage done, I’ll set you free
And I don’t know how someone could do this to you
It hurts me just to see you cry on the ground
I know that I can love you and help you through
Just open, just open your heart
Just feel it, feel it in your heart
Cause from the start I have loved you
Always loved you baby
But you were taken and he broke you
Always loved you baby
Now I have a chance, to get you now
Just take a chance, and let me show you how
To love again
To love again
You're too afraid, that I might hurt you
But I’m nothing, like him oh no
Just gimme a chance, to take a look
Give me a moment, let me in
And when I look into your face I see beauty
And I don’t understand how he could’ve broken you
I know that I can love you and help you through
Just open, just open your heart
Just feel it, feel it in your heart
Cause from the start I have loved you
Always loved you baby
But you were taken and he broke you
Always loved you baby
Now I have a chance, to get you now
Just take a chance, and let me show you how
To love again
To love again
I feel you opening up
It just took a little luck
I feel you coming closer
Running away from his poster
What he did to you was bad
But I am here and you are glad
Cause I can hold you
Oh I can hold you
Cause from the start I have loved you
Always loved you baby
But you were taken and he broke you
Always loved you baby
Now I have a chance, to get you now
Just take a chance, and let me show you how
To love again
To love again
To love again
To love again
Just open, just open your heart
Just feel it, feel it in your heart
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Leanbh - a love song wrote today by me in Irish
Leanbh,
Tá grá agam duit
Bíonn tú an grá mo shaol
An chuisle mo chroí
Tá tú go hálainn
Táim i ngrá leat leanbh
An bpósfaidh tú mé?
Tá tú anamchara
Más é do thoil é
A fhanacht go deo liom
Tá póg agam duit
Maireann lá go ruaig ach
Maireann an grá go huaigh
Leanbh,
Capall an tsaoil an grá
Níl leigheas ar an ngrá ach pósadh
Mar sin, an bpósfaidh tú mé?
An té nach bpósann níl ach uaigneas dilte dósan
Mar sin, an bpósfaidh tú mé?
Mas é do thoil é!
Ní féasta go rósta, ní céasadh go pósta
Tabhair póg dom, leanbh
M'fhíorghrá
Tá tú iontach álainn
Mo stór, mo thaisce
An bpósfaidh tú mé?
Is leighis is fearr do ghrá pósadh
Tá tú an-dhathúil dom
Glaoigh ar na gardaí!
Maireann grá go deo
Agus tá tú mo ghrá
Leanbh,
Tá grá agam duit
Bíonn tú an grá mo shaol
An chuisle mo chroí
Tá tú go hálainn
Táim i ngrá leat leanbh
An bpósfaidh tú mé?Photography site - https://www.sryanbruenphoto.com/
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'Afraid'
Walking by the street, walking by, dancing to the beat
Worrying about my girl, hope she's alright, please stay with me
Worrying about my girl, hope she's alright, please stay with me
Every day in every way, the feeling's getting deeper
Every day in every way, I know that I can keep her
Because she is mine forever
Come on don't be afraid to live out the life with me
Me and you dancing every night in the clubs living free
You told me you were coming, I couldn't wait
I've gotta get more loving, before it's too late
Now don't be afraid to live out the life with me
Me and you dancing every night in the clubs living free
You told me you were coming, I couldn't wait
I've gotta get more loving, before it's too late
The day I met you, I knew you were lovely
I was right, I held you close to me
Through all the night, I know it was gonna be
Through all the night, I know it was gonna be
Me and you in our penthouse suite
Come on don't be afraid to live out the life with me
Me and you dancing every night in the clubs living free
You told me you were coming, I couldn't wait
I've gotta get more loving, before it's too late
Now don't be afraid to live out the life with me
Me and you dancing every night in the clubs living free
You told me you were coming, I couldn't wait
I've gotta get more loving, before it's too late
There is no need to be afraid
Come on there is no need to be afraid
Come on there is no need to be afraid
Come on don't be afraid to live out the life with me
Me and you dancing every night in the clubs living free
You told me you were coming, I couldn't wait
I've gotta get more loving, before it's too late
Now don't be afraid to live out the life with me
Me and you dancing every night in the clubs living free
You told me you were coming, I couldn't wait
I've gotta get more loving, before it's too late
Now don't be afraid to live out the life with me
Me and you dancing every night in the clubs living free
You told me you were coming, I couldn't wait
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'Torch'
[Verse 1]
Girl with the light on those eyes
You make me wanna burn up
With all the lies you've been telling me
I'm about to blow up
But every night, it gets stranger
Cause every fright, it gets bitter
[Chorus]
Let the torch in your eyes count the stars
Let it show you that you're the Queen of Mars
Let the torch in your eyes light the world
Cause every day is full of darkness without you girl
Yeah let the torch in your eyes
Let the torch in your eyes count the stars
[Beat Break]
[Verse 2]
Girl you make Mercury
Wanna become hotter
Every night I look at Jupiter
I always think of my fireball
But every night, it gets stranger
Cause every fright, it gets bitter
[Chorus]
Let the torch in your eyes count the stars
Let it show you that you're the Queen of Mars
Let the torch in your eyes light the world
Cause every day is full of darkness without you girl
Yeah let the torch in your eyes
Let the torch in your eyes count the stars
[Beat Break]
Let the torch in your eyes count the stars
Neptune hold on, Venus here we come
Let the torch in your eyes count the stars
Oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
Oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
Let the torch in your eyes count the stars
Oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
Oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
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'Your Final Hour'
Your ancestors look down on you
Like guests at your wedding feast
Wonder why you got wed
Know you'll never get no peace
And you walk about
Like a queen without a throne
All I want to do is shout
Cos you're all alone
Your final hour has come
But it doesn't mean you're done
You'll live long up there
Up away from my hair
But I'll always treasure you right here
Spirits look down on you
Like ghosts from your dreams
Stars from your nightmares
Witnesses to your screams
So why did you do it
Why did you go get wed
I'm the one who loves you
I feel like the living dead
Your final hour has come
But it doesn't mean you're done
You'll live long up there
Up away from my hair
But I'll always treasure you right here
And you walk about
Like a queen without a throne
All I want to do is shout
Cos you're all alone
Cos you're all alone
Cos you're all alone
Your final hour has come
Your final hour has come
But it doesn't mean you're done
You'll live long up there
Up away from my hair
But I'll always treasure you right herePhotography site - https://www.sryanbruenphoto.com/
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