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So I wrote my first song.. What do you think?

TheBiz · 2017-07-28 20:34:25

It's very rough and I know it's not everyones cup of tea.. https://soundcloud.com/seanf999/let-me-in-my-first-original Here it is. What do you think? Any advice?

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28-07-2017 9:34pm

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TheBiz

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It's very rough and I know it's not everyones cup of tea..

https://soundcloud.com/seanf999/let-me-in-my-first-original Here it is.

What do you think? Any advice?

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#2 18-11-2017 11:53pm
Mankelland

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You have a great voice.

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#3 20-05-2018 5:58pm
Sheridan81

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Good singing. I don't like the song. It's not my thing.

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#4 30-05-2018 3:22pm
breadbin

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Fantastic singing, but way too short!

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#5 09-07-2018 9:46am
Giraffe Box

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Great song and great singing.
Nice one!

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#6 05-08-2018 5:45pm
Craig Thompson

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Sounds like the beginning of a good song.

Maybe needs more work.

Shows talent.

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#7 21-02-2022 6:02pm
Joshua B

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I like it. I'ts not quite my thing and I would put diferent inflections on certain words but very good. It feels like the opening song of a concept album, if that makes any sence. good luck.

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