BELFAST RAP!!

ayman23 · 06-09-2011 10:31PM #1

A track recorded a few months ago, check it out lads and let me know what you all think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7YHcByGtEEk

Boom_Bap · 07-09-2011 11:29AM

Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but that is painful to listen to regardless of the sound quality.
You're line structure is all over the place and you are not rhyming with the beat at all.

Shapey Fiend · 07-09-2011 05:36PM

Needs a lot more work. Get a proper microphone. Put the rhyming word after the snare. Make each line the same number of syllables (ish). And just practice a lot.

Listen to some other Norn Iron rappers might give you an idea of how it's done.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DWKNU-aDzf8

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ib5NwzGMdMs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0JzVSmCel_0

07-09-2011 05:45PM

That track (sketch nines one) is getting some serious youtube hate, when it is a very solid first track.

Shapey Fiend · 07-09-2011 05:49PM

Most people are hostile towards the whole idea of white Irish people rapping. Same old. They'll get over it. As I said before at least it's getting noticed. SertOne (who produced Sketches track) has a beautiful video on that channel and it only got 400 hits.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Gs1fKM1HUg

07-09-2011 06:39PM

Sertone has some good mixes, decent producer by the sounds of it too.

BELFAST RAP!!

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