Aspiring rap artist, comments appreciated on my sh*t

stavstavstav · 05-04-2009 03:05PM #1

I ain't got no motherf-cking posts
That's why I busted your aces
You're fat mother****er {Take Money}
North Side
Bad Boy pokores {Take Money}
You know who the realist is
mods we bring it to {Take Money}
(ha ha, that's alright)

First off, **** your forum
And the sh*t you post
Pokore, when we ride
Come equipped with stavros
You claim to be a mod
But I ****ed your wife
We bust on weak tights
niggas bust for Life
Plus Sherifu tryin' to see me weak
Hearts I rep
KevIRL and 5starpool
Some mark ass b-tches
We keep on coming
While we running for your posts
Steady posting
Keep on busting at them fools
You know the rules
JonnyArson go ask you homie
How I'll leave you
Cut your young ass up
See you in pieces
Now be deceased
Devore,
Don't **** around with real GM's
Quick to snatch your ugly ass, off the felt
So f-ck being banned
I'll let them moderatores know
It's on for Life
Don't let the Stavros
post tonoysh (ha ha)
Bad Boys getting busted on prima and ipokore,
**** with me
And get turn cards peeled
You know, see

[Chorus:]
Report your posts when you see Stavros,
Call the mods when you see Stavros, uh
Who banned me,
But your mods didn't finish your goal
Now you 'bout to feel the wrath of a troll
Boards, I post it up

Anyone think I got the illest talent or am I a whack ass mofo? Be honest now lol

Pen1987 · 05-04-2009 06:44PM

LMAOROFL Oh **** n*gga you a killa emcee I aint nevah take boy like u on ina battle.

Ait ait, lemme break this **** dwn foh you bruh, da illest lines right...

stavstavstav wrote: »

You claim to be a mod
But I ****ed your wife
We bust on weak tights
niggas bust for Life

Dam mayne! That **** nearly blew my off ma keyboard yo. U a killa!

stavstavstav wrote: »

Plus Sherifu tryin' to see me weak
Hearts I rep
KevIRL and 5starpool
Some mark ass b-tches
We keep on coming
While we running for your posts
Steady posting
Keep on busting at them fools
You know the rules
JonnyArson go ask you homie
How I'll leave you
Cut your young ass up
See you in pieces
Now be deceased

Oh ****, you running for posts, I be runnin from your bro. Homie you a merderer emcee with the punchlines, dam! Don't cut my young ass up! Pleez brah!

stavstavstav wrote: »

Devore,
Don't **** around with real GM's
Quick to snatch your ugly ass, off the felt
So f-ck being banned

Oh, you dint juz say dat. DeVore gonna kill you on the mic, diz will be one hot battle yo.

stavstavstav wrote: »

I'll let them moderatores know
It's on for Life

I wouldn't put it past you man, I say u iz a killa fo real, ur use of Times New Roman is vicious.

stavstavstav wrote: »

[Chorus:]
Report your posts when you see Stavros,
Call the mods when you see Stavros, uh
Who banned me,
But your mods didn't finish your goal
Now you 'bout to feel the wrath of a troll
Boards, I post it up

Shiiiiiiiiiitt... catchy chorus too man. killa emcee.