New Nugget tune - Loser

ItsNugget · 14-09-2008 09:24PM #1

Off my forthcoming cd
www.bebo.com/nugget-mc
Any feedback welcome

Seaneh · 14-09-2008 09:32PM

Beat is fairly ****e in fairness Gar.

Seaneh · 14-09-2008 09:34PM

Actually, it's just the guitar bit that's ****e upon further listening.

ItsNugget · 14-09-2008 09:46PM

This is actually one of me favourite beatsd ive used! Ah well cheers for the listen seany(not the insane one):p

Seaneh · 14-09-2008 09:53PM

No problem, like i said it was only the guitar bit I didnt like, the drums are nice like.

ItsNugget · 14-09-2008 10:02PM

and the lyricals?

Pen1987 · 15-09-2008 01:07PM

Solid track. Theres always 'something' missing in these 'unprofessional' artist songs though...

I think your delivery could be improved slightly, not nescessarily in the verses but in the chorus certainly. I feel you should of recorded each 'Loser' on a different track of the song program then panned or edited each one with a different side or effect, when you say 'LOSER LOSER LOSER DRUNK ABUSER' in the track you have to rush into the 'drunk abuser part' because its hard to say it all and stay on rhythm, it would sound better if you recorded it differently and seperately IMO. Other than that, nice stuff, would sound good live I'd say after the crowd has a few scoops.

Maybe try recording the LOSER LOSER LOSER part again then adding an echo to the first 'Loser' and pan and loser the following two Losers to make it sound more blended/professional. Just my two cents.

ItsNugget · 20-09-2008 10:29AM

Cheers man always good to get a bit of indept constructive crit. Ill keep it in mind with the new stuff. Layering can really add a lot especially in hooks and chroruses. I suppose ill only learn as i go. Much appreciated man.

New Nugget tune - Loser

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