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Haiku as Gaeilge?

  • 27-04-2007 12:32AM
    #1
    luckat
    Closed Accounts Posts: 5,366 ✭✭✭


    Ar aghaidh libh - éasca ar fad
    samhradh ag teacht agus
    griann ag taitneamh


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  • #2
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    Ní thuigim iad i gceart caithfear a rá, ach bainfidh mé triail as ar aon nós.


    Fuinneog oscailte
    Glór na n-éan
    An solas ón ríomhaire


  • #3
    luckat
    Closed Accounts Posts: 5,366 ✭✭✭luckat


    Na PDs, FF, FG
    chomh gleoite, chomh ionraic
    Ohhh, deacair...


  • #4
    luckat
    Closed Accounts Posts: 5,366 ✭✭✭luckat


    GaryOR wrote:
    Ní thuigim iad i gceart caithfear a rá, ach bainfidh mé triail as ar aon nós.


    Fuinneog oscailte
    Glór na n-éan
    An solas ón ríomhaire

    :)


  • #5
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    Brú na hoifige
    Spriocdháta ag teacht
    Ag scríobh Haiku


  • #6
    luckat
    Closed Accounts Posts: 5,366 ✭✭✭luckat


    ...an madra ag tafadh
    an carr réite, agus mise
    ag dul go dtí an fharraige


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  • #7
    Míshásta
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 634 ✭✭✭Míshásta


    Haigh, a Chú,
    Conas tánn tú?
    Go diail arú.


  • #8
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    Leathuair tar éis a haon déag
    Ocras an domhain
    Ingne ite


  • #9
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    Mísh&#225 wrote: »
    Haigh, a Chú,
    Conas tánn tú?
    Go diail arú.

    Ar fheabhas :)


  • #10
    luckat
    Closed Accounts Posts: 5,366 ✭✭✭luckat


    Mísh&#225 wrote: »
    Haigh, a Chú

    Heh!


  • #11
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    Seachtain nua,
    is mise, ag fanacht
    dá deireadh


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  • #12
    Múinteoir
    Closed Accounts Posts: 1,184 ✭✭✭Múinteoir


    Céard iad na rialacha meadrachta, arís?


  • #13
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    M&#250 wrote: »
    Céard iad na rialacha meadrachta, arís?

    rialacha :confused: :eek:


  • #14
    Míshásta
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 634 ✭✭✭Míshásta


    GaryOR wrote:
    rialacha :confused: :eek:

    Ar dtús:

    3 líne
    17 siolla: 5 - 7 - 5

    agus an iliomad rialacha casta eile.


  • #15
    Múinteoir
    Closed Accounts Posts: 1,184 ✭✭✭Múinteoir


    Mísh&#225 wrote: »
    Ar dtús:

    3 líne
    17 siolla: 5 - 7 - 5

    agus an iliomad rialacha casta eile.


    An ceart agat a Mhíshásta.
    Japanese haiku have been traditionally composed in 5-7-5 syllables. When poets started writing English haiku in the 1950's, they adopted this 5-7-5 form, thinking it created a similar condition for English-language haiku. This style is what is generally considered "traditional" English haiku.


  • #16
    Karlusss
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,142 ✭✭✭Karlusss


    Is teanga siollach é Seapáinis, tá sé i bhfad níos éasca haiku a scríobh aisti.

    Troid le comhéigin
    An teanga dúchasach, ach
    Bainfidh mé trial as.


  • #17
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    bhuel, bhí a fhios agam go raibh 3 líne ann ach ní thuigim na siollaí i gceart. :confused:

    Níl an chraic seo aon chraic a thuilleadh.....


  • #18
    Karlusss
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,142 ✭✭✭Karlusss


    Níl géar-gá baca le na siollaí as Gaeilge.

    Níor bhac Jack Kerouac leo, nó a lán daoine eile.

    Nuair a aistríotar an-chuid de na chinn i Seapáinis, ní bhíonn na siollaí fós ann.


  • #19
    Catari Jaguar
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 6,649 ✭✭✭Catari Jaguar


    Na scrúdú ag teacht
    Níl mé ag iarradh stáidéir
    Tá mé fós ar boards!


  • #20
    bennanbinn
    Closed Accounts Posts: 1 ✭bennanbinn


    Ionamsa bhur bhais;
    An dorchadas aineolach.
    Iarraim, ni fhreagraim.


  • #21
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    ónár saol ar an talamh
    chuig saol san oifig,
    ramhar


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  • #22
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    Bhris an mhóin a ndromanna,
    briseann an ríomhaire ár meanma,
    an Tíogar Ceilteach


    http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiartjr.htm

    roinnt teicnící don Haiku ar an nasc thuas


  • #23
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    bennanbinn wrote:
    Ionamsa bhur bhais;
    An dorchadas aineolach.
    Iarraim, ni fhreagraim.

    is léir go bhfuil a fhios agatsa céard go díreach atá i gceist leis an gcraic seo Haiku, an féidir leat míniú a thabhairt dhúinn?


    Seo thíos an Haiku a bhí i Lá Nua inniu le Gabriel Rosenstock:

    seomra
    nár thaithíos le tamall –
    creatlach fáinleoige


    An féidir le éinne brí a bhaint as....le bhur dtoil!


  • #24
    simu
    Closed Accounts Posts: 10,730 ✭✭✭✭simu


    GaryOR wrote:


    Seo thíos an Haiku a bhí i Lá Nua inniu le Gabriel Rosenstock:

    seomra
    nár thaithíos le tamall –
    creatlach fáinleoige


    An féidir le éinne brí a bhaint as....le bhur dtoil!

    Feiceann sé éan marbh i seomra ná raibh sé istigh ann le tamall...


  • #25
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    simu wrote:
    Feiceann sé éan marbh i seomra ná raibh sé istigh ann le tamall...

    á, feicim, cliste.

    Teach mór is ea é gan amhras.


  • #26
    simu
    Closed Accounts Posts: 10,730 ✭✭✭✭simu


    Teach mór mar is dual d'fhile. :)


  • #27
    GaryOR
    Closed Accounts Posts: 541 ✭✭✭GaryOR


    Éirí na gréine is áille a chonac-
    fearg, imní agus tuirse orm -
    ár gcomharsa challánach


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