Not Quite Roses

~Rebel~ · 30-06-2005 11:25AM #1

This is a little poem myself and my brother wrote one night bored on holidays years ago.

Not Quite Roses
Twinkle twinkle little star,
I smell your armpits from afar,
A Deo i suggest you wear,
For odour permiates the air,
Hygiene surprise would be a shower,
To leave you fresh with eau de flower,
If not i'll simply go insane,
Cause being classed as nasal pain.

Just wondering what the stance is on humour here, as most i've seen have been quite serious, but i find it hard to write good serious pieces. Much prefer odd, weird (burtonesque) things. Just wondering if this is the place for them?

BEAT · 30-06-2005 12:46PM

things like this belong in the cuckoos nest

~Rebel~ · 30-06-2005 01:46PM

...sigh

Le Rack · 30-06-2005 04:40PM

the poems not quite roses either...

funky penguin · 30-06-2005 06:48PM

Worthy of Shakespeare!

/Me shakes my spear.

*Shakey shakey*

Le Rack · 30-06-2005 06:51PM

I'm gonna be big headed and say "me or Rebel"
and if you answer Rebel I shall say "Don't diss Shakespeare!!!"

funky penguin · 30-06-2005 07:11PM

Monkey!

Le Rack · 30-06-2005 07:15PM

in that case, poo on you!

funky penguin · 30-06-2005 07:26PM

Saright!

Le Rack · 30-06-2005 07:29PM

choke!

funky penguin · 30-06-2005 07:33PM

*fart*

Shabadu · 30-06-2005 07:41PM

best poem evarr

Le Rack · 30-06-2005 07:44PM

bloody diabolicle!

NotMe · 30-06-2005 10:53PM

~Rebel~ wrote:

Just wondering if this is the place for them?

THIS is the place for them

Le Rack · 30-06-2005 11:00PM

hehe

Not Quite Roses

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