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Happiness

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  • 02-11-2005 10:43pm
    #1
    lilmissprincess
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    These sleepless nights
    I lie awake
    And listen to the empty silence
    A vacant space left by happiness
    Screams by day, silence by night
    And now silence 24/7.

    The laughter in the room below
    As they sing and dance
    Is over my head
    What they don't know
    They don't care for
    They don't care for me

    This moon shines bright
    To block out the black
    My heavenly darkness gone
    With every hope.
    Every dream.
    Every you.

    This is written about a friend I once had, who went with the flock and abandoned me when i needed him the most. Saw him the other day, and now theres nothing.


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    ctrl-alt-delete
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    now this one like, very nicely done


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    Nirina
    Registered Users Posts: 142 ✭✭Nirina


    i also like this one. It's..unique. I like its shortness, keep at it.


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    Dragan
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    I like it.

    You express your sorrow very well.


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    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    Thanks people!


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    Le Rack
    Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    24/7 is a bit out of place, I know what you mean and there is nothing there, I know you're hurt but things like that happen in life you gotta pick yourself up and keep moving.


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    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    Rach, I think you've got the wrong friend, and i am keeping moving...


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    Le Rack
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    oh well done!


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    NoDayBut2Day
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    Very nice :)


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    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    I have no idea what Le Racks sarcastic remark was about but whatever. C'est la vie. Anyway...thanks.


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    #11
    Le Rack
    Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    That was not sarcasm dear. That was a genuine comment of pride, but whatever.


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    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    ok then, well thanks..


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