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Smiles Hide Everything

  • 11-10-2005 4:49pm
    #1
    Nirina
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 142 ✭✭


    Smiles Hide Everything

    Verse 1
    Beneath the smile is a world of love and hate.
    I’ve told myself, over and over again,
    That it’d get better.
    Beneath the clothes are scar that are up to date.
    I’ve hurt over and over again,
    But never felt better.

    Chorus:
    Quiet little,
    Has never been let be.
    This smile covers me up,
    This smile is my disguise.
    This smile covers up,
    Coz my world is full of lies.

    Verse 2
    Beneath the glasses are many tears.
    I’ve cried over and over again,
    But that only makes it worse.
    Beneath my lies are the painful secrets I’ve had for years.
    And over and over again,
    I never told them,
    Because I’m a witch’s curse.

    Repeat Chorus

    Verse 3
    Beneath everyone is a secret they’ve never told.
    To everyone else you’ve never been bold.
    We hide ourselves, we hate ourselves,
    I’ve hidden too long, I wanna be strong…
    But go back were I belong,
    Back in the corner, to cry.
    Back in myself, I don’t know why.
    I hide among these lies,
    My smile being the disguise.
    My clothes to cover up,
    My glasses so tears don’t show up.
    Beneath this smile is my life, of love and hate,
    Of life and war.
    Beneath this smile is the real me,
    The one I cannot ever be…

    Repeat Chorus To Fade

    © Nirina 2005


Comments

  • #2
    Le Rack
    Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    love the third verse, suppose I'd need to hear it to a tune or rhythm to really appreciate it.


  • #3
    ctrl-alt-delete
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 14,648 ✭✭✭✭ctrl-alt-delete


    Nirina wrote:
    Quiet little,
    Has never been let be.
    This smile covers me up,
    This smile is my disguise.
    This smile covers up,
    Coz my world is full of lies.

    dont know if there is a typo here?

    i think first two verses are ok,the chorus i cant get to grips with at the moment, the last verse is too "rhymey" for me, although i love the last two lines

    in saying all this though it could be totally different and work wonders as a song which it obviously is.


  • #4
    Nirina
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 142 ✭✭Nirina


    Hey, thanks you two :) Glad you like it, i had difficulty picking one to post. The chorus is sorta a "soft" part of a song, whereas the rest would be more "metal/rock"-ish. Make sense? anywho, music would be accompanied soon enough, and if i get a demo i'll post.


  • #5
    NoDayBut2Day
    Closed Accounts Posts: 944 ✭✭✭NoDayBut2Day


    I think it'd be cool to hear to music too. Thanks for sharing!!

    ;)


  • #6
    Nirina
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 142 ✭✭Nirina


    NoDayBut2Day wrote:
    I think it'd be cool to hear to music too. Thanks for sharing!!

    ;)
    And thank YOU for politely posting a reply! :)


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