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Pink Heart shaped Lollipop

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  • 03-10-2005 7:56pm
    #1
    Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭


    When you're young,
    There is magic in the world,
    And the glitter sparkles
    And your soul is still totally there.

    When your grown,
    Is the magic gone#Is the glitter just a mess
    And you've gone from being toatlly there.

    Until you come up to me
    With something in your hand
    A pink heart shaped lollipop
    And it claims the magic back
    Pink heart shaped lollipop and
    The soul is reclaimed
    Pink heart shaped lollipop
    And I'm falling in love
    With you.

    Rach knows what this is about!


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 944 ✭✭✭NoDayBut2Day


    Cute ;)

    I like the childlike wonder sound to it.

    :D


  • Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    The lollipop exists....yeah, it was a show i was in, this dude handed my friend a pink heart shaped lollipop and then made out he didnt fancy her...you should see the damn thing!


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 944 ✭✭✭NoDayBut2Day


    Awww... sad... :(


  • Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    sad as in he is, or the entire sitch? Yeah, well it turns out he likes me too...


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    Cute and childish tis all good!
    But the L word?????

    Yeah here's the funny, it was assumed from his actions he had a crush on me, cept, he's like 12 and I'm just 18.... But then turns out he likes Lilmiss... nawh shucks!


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 944 ✭✭✭NoDayBut2Day


    haha... at least you got a cute poem out of it anyway..

    ;)


  • Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    yep....and a little adorable dude who answers to Babydoll...he he...mess with their heads..


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    *me chokes on laughter!
    *drops dead from histerics!


  • Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    shuddup he's my babydoll and i wuvs him....


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    hmmm... no comment

    anyway, continue with the writing...


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  • Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    what do ya mean by no comment? the other day he said he wuvs me too..although that could have been cos I bought him sweets in Deegans..


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 31,967 ✭✭✭✭Sarky


    Nobody cares.

    Stop the spam.


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 91 ✭✭Phat Chance


    I like it, the whole tone is simplistic which works well. (Also the tone is as sickly-sweet as the aforementioned lollipop ;) /jk.)

    Don't be cruel, messing with a poor twelve year old's head! That's just the evilest, of evil acts!!


  • Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    I'm not messing wth his head, we're great friends, and its starting to be a little more..


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 944 ✭✭✭NoDayBut2Day


    I'm not messing wth his head, we're great friends, and its starting to be a little more..

    Well, hope all works out for you!

    ;)


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 31,967 ✭✭✭✭Sarky


    Two.

    Two posts out of fifteen- fifteen!- that had any bearing on the original.

    As nobody appears to have paid attention to my warning, this is now locked.


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