Voodoo Magic

carpothepunk

This is a song i wrote a while back and i just dug it up,enjoy(or not)

You get that book on voodoo magic?
So tell me what to do with this
you gotta take it,stick a pin in it
and hope you dont **** up the ****

Make a doll now,twist the head
go to their house,to check that theyre dead
not a drop of blood flows from their chest
and whos house is this?whos family nest
have i disturbed with thoughts of needles and murder
stick a pin in it to take it further


am i deranged,am i obsessed
with killing but spilling no blood from their chest
like a creeping silent death
i leave no trace
no more scars time can erase

Make a doll now,twist the head
go to their house,to check that theyre dead
not a drop of blood flows from their chest
and whos house is this?whos family nest
have i disturbed with thoughts of needles and murder
stick a pin in it to take it further

Next victim
Take your place
Are you just another number
Just another pretty face?

carpothepunk

nobody have an opinion on it?

jimmidy_cricket

Its not easy to have any opinion on a song when I don't know how it goes. Wouldn't be my cuppa tea as i read it but then again if i were to hear it being sung i'd probably love it.

Le Rack

fukkin love it, really dark, morbid, twisted imagery, worked for me as poem or song, keep em comin!

carpothepunk

cheers mate,any other comments guys?