another day

cuddles

off i go, as before,
unable to stop.
memories cetch up on me
and send me off to rot.
never before have i felt this way,
a way of disbelief.
no ones comeing back for me,
for i am all alone.
and right now alone i stay,
for better or for worse.
this is how i lead my life,
for another day.
when this loney day shal come,
ill need no one else.
for i have learned on my own to stay,
for thats the only way.

jimmidy_cricket

I dunno, a bit all over the place you start off with "off i go, as before" suggesting that its a regular thing but by the end of the poem your saying "when this lonely day shall come" as if it hasn't happen, so I'm kinda lost; are you lonely now? or were you lonely before and now your just anticipating being lonely again, which is making you lonely? Its kinda messy, maybe just needs a bit of tidying up

cuddles

i wasnt realy basing it on anything inparticular but on things im noticing around me..