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Calm After The Storm

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  • 30-07-2005 11:03pm
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    Le Rack
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    The rustle of the wind through the trees
    Reminds me of the feelings you made me feel.
    From gently fluttering, to extatic, to calm tranquility.
    To deathly still; when the wind is gone.

    How can a mere breeze,
    Feel so like a howling gale.
    Leaving devistation in its wake,
    Leaving all in ruin.
    Seems nothing could survive.

    Nothing could live in the wreck,
    This ruin, this supposed existance.
    Life without sun,
    Without water,
    Without wind.
    Without you.


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    TerrorFirmer
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    Le Rack, do you think these up on the spot? They seem to suggest someone is writing them at the current moment, and more forcing them to sound poetic and meangingful rather then trying to get a specific issue or meaning across!


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    airetam_storm
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    Na you just gotta be weird to appreciate them ;)

    Another good one but there all similarly themed, well from my point of view anyway


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    TerrorFirmer
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    Interesting, and by the way, I was in no way putting down your creative ability...I do like the way in which they are written!

    I even posted my first bit of poetry here on boards just there!


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    Nidge
    Closed Accounts Posts: 560 ✭✭✭Nidge


    Le Rack wrote:
    The rustle of the wind through the trees
    Reminds me of the feelings you made me feel.
    From gently fluttering, to ecstatic, to calm tranquility.
    To deathly still; when the wind is gone.

    How can a mere breeze,
    Feel so like a howling gale.
    Leaving devastation in its wake,
    Leaving all in ruin.
    Seems nothing could survive.

    Nothing could live in the wreck,
    This ruin, this supposed existence.
    Life without sun,
    Without water,
    Without wind.
    Without you.

    I encourage that you continue your poetry posting but only after I remind you of a few common spellings that people make mistakes on (that you have also done here), the corrections are in bold. :)


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    airetam_storm
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    That lad 's a walking dictionary ;)


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    Nidge
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    airetam_storm wrote:
    That lad 's a walking dictionary ;)

    Isn't he just? ;)

















    ¬_¬


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    the raven
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    Nidge wrote:
    ...but only after I remind you of a few common spellings that people make mistakes on...

    damn it, beat me to the punch...

    not a great poem. you've done much better.


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    Le Rack
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    I probably should explain, I wrote a batch then put tem all up together, written over a few weeks, but then over a couple of days I wrote a few more, and put them up together. You might think theres not much mening behind them but theres meaning in every word.


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    Le Rack
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    shur'up! :) Thanx though, my spellings not fab and I usually write at night, making it worse...


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    airetam_storm
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    Le Rack wrote:
    shur'up! :)
    Ah you can write great stuff, whilst not being able to speak the language :p

    Il break ya ye fúckin muppe... :D


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    #12
    Le Rack
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    Gee! Thanx! :)


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    #13
    airetam_storm
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    www.langerland.com
    The English Language, classic :D


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    #14
    Le Rack
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    ugh couldn't be bothered, moping over being single!


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    ANarcho-Munk
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    :rolleyes:


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    Le Rack
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    ANarcho-Munk wrote:
    :rolleyes:
    grrgh!


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    lilmissprincess
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    Hey iv had a lot worse week than u..b happy...I'm hated by about half of my "friends" for something I didnt do...grrrrrrrrrrr........


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    #18
    airetam_storm
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,301 ✭✭✭airetam_storm


    What they think you did?


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    BEAT
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    people, get back on topic or the thread will be locked.


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    lilmissprincess
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    airetam_storm wrote:
    What they think you did?
    Spread rumours bout them. I didnt. I havent even seen em in a fortnight, cos I've been in a different county for Gods Sake! Bet it was just fear of confrontation, I wasnt there, so they didnt have the whole face to face thing.
    And this does sort of fit the topic. But great poem rach!


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    airetam_storm
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    lilmissprincess wrote:
    Spread rumours bout them. I didnt. I havent even seen em in a fortnight, cos I've been in a different county for Gods Sake! Bet it was just fear of confrontation, I wasnt there, so they didnt have the whole face to face thing.
    Fúck them, if they ditch you that easily they arent real friends, but i suppose your poems reflect that :(


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    #22
    Le Rack
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    lilmissprincess wrote:
    Spread rumours bout them. I didnt. I havent even seen em in a fortnight, cos I've been in a different county for Gods Sake! Bet it was just fear of confrontation, I wasnt there, so they didnt have the whole face to face thing.
    And this does sort of fit the topic. But great poem rach!
    thanx Lis, you know the drill!


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    lilmissprincess
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    airetam_storm wrote:
    Fúck them, if they ditch you that easily they arent real friends, but i suppose your poems reflect that :(
    yeah i realised that the other day and sort of went on a diary-poem spree. i dont hav 2 put up wit theeirr sh!t any more.


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    #24
    ANarcho-Munk
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    Please just take this to the PI forum if you want to continue all this yip yapping sh!te!

    Sorry, but it's getting pretty annoying at this stage.


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    BEAT
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    yes, if I have to lock 1 more thread because of the off topic stuff I will ban everyone involved in it.


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