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Accidental Fate

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  • 30-07-2005 10:40pm
    #1
    Le Rack
    Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭


    The moon turned to blood
    the night you were born.
    Destined to scour the earth
    Seizing what you could,
    When you came accross it.

    Then you came accross me.
    You claimed you were smitten,
    From that very frist instant,
    You layed your gaze upon me.

    My eyes glistened,
    You felt a tingle in the air around me;
    Or so you say.
    And from the moment I brushed by you,
    You knew you needed me.

    Oft I sit and wonder,
    How and why I caught you so.
    Then I sit and wonder,
    Why I ever let you go.


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    #2
    Le Rack
    Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    I assure you I'm not being an egotistical b!tch, but thats things he told me and the last verse changes the ego trip view into remorse.


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    Nidge
    Closed Accounts Posts: 560 ✭✭✭Nidge


    Le Rack wrote:

    My glistened,

    What of yours glistened?


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    ANarcho-Munk
    Closed Accounts Posts: 2,397 ✭✭✭ANarcho-Munk


    Yup I like the last verse the most


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    the raven
    Registered Users Posts: 329 ✭✭the raven


    it's not great at all Le Rack, no redeeming features. "oft" made me wince...


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    #6
    Le Rack
    Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    Nidge wrote:
    What of yours glistened?
    fixed!:)


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