Snowflake

Le Rack

Gets cold outside
As the frost settles on the ground.
A clear dark night outside
And all I want is you.
But you're not there.
Even as you hold me in your arms,
You're still not there.

The stars sit mocking
Burning brightly
As they burn to death.

Your kiss; as cold as the night.
Your touch; like the ice on my shoes.
What's wrong with you anyway?
Do I not give enough?
Since you pocess me, I doubt thats true...

Zombie stars
Continue their glaring chorous
Their king will kill them off.

A tear of glass meets the ground
Splinters in a colour splendour
Reflecting the moons solitary gaze, I walk.
A lone flake falls,
It becomes me,
Kissing you.
One last time.







its shíte I know but I like some of the images so neh, comments welcome.

the raven

"A tear of glass meets the ground
Splinters in a colour splendour
Reflecting the moons solitary gaze.
A lone flake falls,
It becomes me,
Kissing you.
One last time."

keep this. get rid of the rest.

(sorry, i'm a stickler for spelling: "possess". and there's a couple o' apostrophes missing in places.)



"Burning brightly
As they burn to death"
that's good... bit about stars mocking... hmm, where've i heard that before?

Le Rack

shur'up!
what can I say your an inspiration!
its ok correct my spelling at all times, its drastic!