Final Sight

Le Rack

Sitting here alone.
Awash in the soft glow,
Of the liar's light.
Thoughts racing through my head
Pounding with detestfull glee
Sending me flying
And the floor falls eye-level.

My mouth full of sand
My veins flow with somehting,
That's not quite my blood.
"There's gonna be scars"
Oh really?! Some more?!
What's all the commotion?
Where is everyone going?

Hello, and who are you?

the raven

Le Rack wrote:

Awash in the soft glow,
Of the liar's light.

Sending me flying
the floor falls eye-level.

these bits = fantastic. er, scrap the rest.

Le Rack

honestly they are my favourite bits, I was like, "hmm candles?", "soft?" they make every thing look nice and soft so therefore do not tell the truth and everyone always says, they came eye level with the floor but when your that doped...

raven what do you own?

the raven

Le Rack wrote:

raven what do you own?

?

to answer, nothing.

Le Rack

so you are one of your self being. well done

the raven

Le Rack wrote:

so you are one of your self being. well done

sarcasm?

Le Rack

most definately not, I believe in confidence, independence and individuality, few people actually do that these days