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  • 29-06-2005 11:22pm
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    Registered Users Posts: 13,907 ✭✭✭✭


    Innocent Eyes

    I sit here without a sound watching you sleep,
    With your eyes closed I sit and wonder what it is you see,
    We only find beauty in what it is we keep,
    And it’s easier to believe in things we perceive,
    Even still there’s a light that’s shining from your eyes,
    Blistering and searing it enhances my desires.

    The clouds are breaking and the morning is sunned,
    As the night has taken its last deep breath,
    Your eyes they flicker as the new day comes,
    And I am greeted by a beautiful smile,
    Even still there’s a power that radiates from your eyes,
    Intense and passionate it enhances my desires.

    A word softly spoken lets me know you’re in love,
    And that I have been the one you were dreaming of,
    My thoughts are now enveloped with the look on your face
    So delicate, subtle and so in its place,
    And still there’s a light that’s shining from your eyes,
    And still there’s that essence of power in your smile,
    And still you’re so innocent and such a delicate prize,
    You’re perfect and priceless as you fill my desires.



    its an old poem,i think i have come a long way since the in terms of writing, anyhow as always comments good or bad are much apreciated and thank you for reading.


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    its really pretty, but calling your loved one a prize? Not a good route to take...
    I still like it though


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