does anyone c the meaning in this poem?

stevejazzx

this poem is slighty obscure in what its trying to say
I wonder if anyone can get meaning out of it


Tick Tock


The calculated seconds simmer
As number 4 is laborious
Thirsty for that first glimmer
“File the first: A notorious”
Read the third three times
On how A, then B, then C
Lead me away from those seven crimes
And duplicity

Spied that solitary two
Wrapped as a figure 8
Their souls met beneath a tree
On lips s wet their lonesome fate

And number four is almost through
As Z equals 26
He cries “this ninth file is only new”
“I smell another fatal fix”
The small black book
The thin red lines
The purple patch went unrecorded
The ledgers bent, the lights too low
The purple patch went unrecorded
The light the noise the ebb and flow
The balance almost nigh,
Love was U the twenty first
You let me be your number 2
But I like this ninth file still thirst
For order through and through

el_tiddlero

is it that you had a german and loved the preciseness of it all but found someone else after who suits you better but you still thirst for that superior efficiency??????

Raphael

It's about Death*


*meaning subject to terms and conditions

koneko

Are you trying to write a poem, or a "clever" riddle?

Art is personal. If it means something to you, that's all that matters.

stevejazzx

el_tiddlero wrote:

is it that you had a german and loved the preciseness of it all but found someone else after who suits you better but you still thirst for that superior efficiency??????

eh a german?
ok the word preciseness is everything to the key of the poem

stevejazzx

Raphael wrote:

It's about Death*


*meaning subject to terms and conditions

not about death
its about how severe monotony leads to (in the poem anyway) a madness and a kinda yearning for things you let escape.

stevejazzx

koneko wrote:

Are you trying to write a poem, or a "clever" riddle?

Art is personal. If it means something to you, that's all that matters.

yeah i was trying to write a poem but i suppose its a little bit from column a and a little from column b
its meant to riddling because of the subject matter the character in the poem is a tense precise accountant tpye who has gone mad

the raven

it's not a riddle. if you think it is then it's a sh!t riddle.
it's almost a poem. if not for the few eye catching image/phrases i wouldn't have commented. and don't be the arrogant toddler asking if we "understand" you and your style.

i dunno, nevermind me. or then again, do.

stevejazzx

real sorry if i sounded arrogant
then again i expected that kinda reaction or rather i was asking for it
the reason i asked if anyone could c meaning in the poem was because after it was finished i felt it was too obscure so i just wanted to c what people got from it with a quick reading
wasnt playing the all seeing all knowing king of poetry or anything like that
i'm not like that.