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  • 16-05-2005 3:25pm
    #1
    golfgirl
    Closed Accounts Posts: 96 ✭✭


    Time to say
    farewell to self
    moments when tears
    were sad enough

    How do I capture
    a fairy dandelion
    without crushing
    its delicate ideal

    Let her brush
    softly by
    in a wind that makes
    a watery eye.


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    #2
    MojoMaker
    Registered Users Posts: 4,592 ✭✭✭MojoMaker


    Breezy! Like it.

    Air & water, nice combination. Incidentally my two favourite elements. :)


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    #3
    BEAT
    Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    very nice, liked this one much better ;)
    did you used to post under a diff nick golfgirl? just curious


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    #4
    golfgirl
    Closed Accounts Posts: 96 ✭✭golfgirl


    Thanks guys ... glad you got more outta this one Latin Beat, nope I didn't post on here before, u mean to say someone else out there writes like me .. god help em ... and there goes the illusion that my stuff is original :rolleyes:


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    #5
    BEAT
    Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    no no , thats not what I meant at all...hehe
    there were a few people who re-registered with diff nicks and came back to post thier stuff, thought you were one of them ;)
    Your stuff is original, though once you have read enough poetry you will be able to compare writing styles with that of other poets ;)


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    #6
    Salubri
    Registered Users Posts: 56 ✭✭Salubri


    Sweet


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