Listen to my rap track

Robztoday · 09-05-2005 6:52pm #1

Yo,
Could y'all listen to this **** and tell me what you think.
And leave feedback here, and try be honest.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/robirelandmusic.htm

Thanks,
One,
Rob

JoeSchmoe · 09-05-2005 9:53pm

sounds good Rob, no point posting on here looking for construction criticism though, if it ain't a tupac rap produced by Dre then these boys ears are closed, and if its Irish hiphop then, jaysus, they all become pupils at st josephs school for the deaf

try here http://www.irishhiphop.com/forum/list.php?10 for more rounded criticism

Makaveli · 09-05-2005 9:55pm

moron

zx81 · 09-05-2005 10:08pm

you can tell a lot of time went into your tunes, fair play to you, the main thing is that you enjoy it, if others do too it's a bonus, keep it up

Shrimp · 09-05-2005 10:15pm

You alot better than alot of crap iI've heard.. I have a cd of this roup called the fenians.. i knoiw em, they live across the road form em.. Complete crap.. not that ur not crap.. Have you got a lisp.. sounds like it on thesong. also.. i think the voice is not lound enough in some of the songs not clear enough.. still fair play man..

ubu · 09-05-2005 11:13pm

JoeSchmoe wrote:

sounds good Rob, no point posting on here looking for construction criticism though, if it ain't a tupac rap produced by Dre then these boys ears are closed, and if its Irish hiphop then, jaysus, they all become pupils at st josephs school for the deaf

try here http://www.irishhiphop.com/forum/list.php?10 for more rounded criticism

methinks you're an idiot

Kristok · 10-05-2005 9:03am

Shrimp wrote:

not that ur not crap.. Have you got a lisp.... still fair play man..

HaHa good stuff, Irish rap will be big one day keep up the "good" work :rolleyes:

Robztoday · 10-05-2005 2:59pm

Shrimp wrote:

Y Have you got a lisp.. sounds like it on thesong.

Nah..dont got a lisp...just the mik.. recorded 'em at home..but gonna re-do at the studio..anyway, thanks for the responses...and sorry for bleedin' anbody's ears..didnt want that now...But eh..whats wrong with Irish rap? wait...don't tell me..

Pen0s · 10-05-2005 4:24pm

sage francis!

thats who u sound like, exact same except ur not spittin as fast

its ok, the mic quality is better than alot of the tracks ive listened to by net-cees.

keep at it and check ur pms

Evzer · 10-05-2005 8:26pm

Take off the fake accent in fairness

Robztoday · 10-05-2005 8:56pm

Thats my accent...my voice..my rap...in fairness

Makaveli · 10-05-2005 9:29pm

Not bad.
Your flow is a little off rhythm on Lose My Mind I thought, and it was distracting. Also you slur your words a bit sometimes making it difficult to make out what you are saying. I'd lose the southern American drawl at the begining of the song too. There is a strong hint of a pseudu American accent in your songs.

Not meaning to tear you down or anything. Fair play for putting some stuff out there.

Kristok · 11-05-2005 1:49am

I have to say I like the beat on the first song, but you murdered it your flow is awfull.

Robztoday · 11-05-2005 7:38pm

Kristok wrote:

I have to say I like the beat on the first song, but you murdered it your flow is awfull.

"awfull"...hmmm...didn't think it was THAT bad...lol. Thanks.

bush · 13-05-2005 6:14pm

Sounds like a joke

Master T · 06-06-2005 1:47am

hey man............... really like the beat to 'i dont know' and the chorus is good aswel!

But your verses need improvement...........they need timing and they need to be louder......

im trying to record my stuff at the moment but its all mainly freestyle and hard to record......no equipment to use ya know?!

But keep it up man!

What age are ya by the way?

Where ya from?

Listen to my rap track

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