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  • 26-04-2005 8:59pm
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    shiv
    Closed Accounts Posts: 408 ✭✭


    I got close up to your false calm
    Sheer containment of self
    Right up against the rope barrier
    I leant over
    Tipping into your eyes

    They were untitled

    And you gave off a feeling
    Similar to the painting you were watching
    Impossible to get a hold of
    Startling in your beauty

    And I felt compelled to study you

    Only to step back eventually
    When you didn't come forward
    From the impression
    You were withholding

    Offering post-outing coffee instead


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    #2
    BEAT
    Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    excellent shiv! glad to see you posting again ;) its really too long in between pieces ;)


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    #3
    reality
    Closed Accounts Posts: 90 ✭✭reality


    i really like it, its interesting and got a great feeing of depth to it, i feel like its got some amazing background worth writing a novel about!


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