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shiv · 2005-04-26 19:59:07

I got close up to your false calm Sheer containment of self Right up against the rope barrier I leant over Tipping into your eyes They were untitled And you gave off a feeling Similar to the painting you were watching Impossible to get a hold of Startling in your beauty And I felt compelled to study you Only to step back…

26-04-2005 7:59pm

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shiv

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I got close up to your false calm
Sheer containment of self
Right up against the rope barrier
I leant over
Tipping into your eyes

They were untitled

And you gave off a feeling
Similar to the painting you were watching
Impossible to get a hold of
Startling in your beauty

And I felt compelled to study you

Only to step back eventually
When you didn't come forward
From the impression
You were withholding

Offering post-outing coffee instead

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#2 26-04-2005 8:01pm

BEAT

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excellent shiv! glad to see you posting again its really too long in between pieces

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#3 28-04-2005 1:39pm

reality

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i really like it, its interesting and got a great feeing of depth to it, i feel like its got some amazing background worth writing a novel about!

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