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wanting (your opinions!!!)

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  • 20-04-2005 7:18pm
    #1
    reality
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    Wanting.








    Weird the way I want you,
    - More now than then before,
    And yet I drive a wedge,
    I lock up every door.
    Missed chances
    Burn.

    I was stupid to think
    that it would magically come about,
    That we would be together,
    - Usual fears being there in the way,
    Of everything that would,
    That could,
    Make me so happy.
    Denied bliss by me.
    You.


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    Le Rack
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    .......sniffle.......
    it fairly describes my relationship with the guy all my poems are about....


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    qz
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    Sounds good in the hood. Not sure about the word "Burn" though. Don't know why, but good poem. (It's a poem right?!)


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    #4
    reality
    Closed Accounts Posts: 90 ✭✭reality


    i wrote that about two months into my current relationship, i guess i kinda worked things out - at the least we're still together.

    "burn" is meant to stand out, it was my main feeling at the time that i was burning from the inside out with the need for the things i was unable to let myself have.


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