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poem, no title..

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  • 11-04-2005 12:48am
    #1
    unufa
    Closed Accounts Posts: 8 ✭


    hey, long time reader, first time poster, just joined today. hopefully this'll be the first poem of many. I know it's not much good, it just came into my head though and I'd like to see what peoples opinions are of it. All comments and critique are appreciated. It's untitled so far, I'll edit in when I have one for it.


    I asked for the truth
    Now here we are
    At the end of all this
    We both are scarred.

    I thought I could handle it
    I find I cannot
    All my dreams, my hopes
    They lie here to rot.

    I find myself wishing
    From time to time
    That I hadnt gone there
    Hadnt crossed that line.

    Sometimes I wonder
    Would I have been happy
    If only I had let you
    Lie to me..


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    #2
    foxybrowne
    Closed Accounts Posts: 520 ✭✭✭foxybrowne


    Its a sad situation, sometimes the things are better left unsaid.


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    #3
    unufa
    Closed Accounts Posts: 8 ✭unufa


    d'ya mean the subject matter, or the poem itself? Could be either, the poem isnt any good! :p


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    #4
    Le Rack
    Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    sounds like everyday of my life.....
    its incredible


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