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"love"........

Pen0s · 2005-04-08 00:21:18

first piece on the site, i just wrote this like 5 mintues ago(bored in work!) its a little rough at the mintue but tell me what u think. The pain in my mind is forever trapped u said u loved me Then u dumped me and i neva looked back Ive had internal struggles,fights in my own mind U really love me? I just wanted to hug u…

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08-04-2005 1:21am

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Pen0s

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first piece on the site, i just wrote this like 5 mintues ago(bored in work!)
its a little rough at the mintue but tell me what u think.

The pain in my mind is forever trapped
u said u loved me
Then u dumped me and i neva looked back

Ive had internal struggles,fights in my own mind
U really love me?
I just wanted to hug u and put my soul on the line

Life gets to much an all i can feel is stress
i said i loved u
But i was under the thumb and to u 2nd best

Just a test? if i loved u id forgive u too?
What love?
it was my fault, i brought out the worst in u.....

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#2 08-04-2005 1:25am
mayordenis

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very good,
looks to like they would work as lyrics.

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