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The LIght (completed)

  • 02-02-2005 6:52pm
    #1
    BEAT
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    should be attached here...


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  • #2
    MojoMaker
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 5,265 ✭✭✭MojoMaker


    Good job! Sorry I didn't get your email until this morning. Meant to put aside some time to have a proper look at the final version. The editing has worked well though.


  • #3
    BEAT
    Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    no worries. Thanks ;) think I will begin another chapter soon that dwells on family history and then after that another encounter with something of greater power. ;)


  • #4
    iceman_2001_ie
    Closed Accounts Posts: 157 ✭✭iceman_2001_ie


    Cool


  • #5
    iceman_2001_ie
    Closed Accounts Posts: 157 ✭✭iceman_2001_ie


    iceman_2001_ie wrote:
    Cool

    Hmmm....

    I should probably give a more in depth critisism of your story, but I'm not literary minded (being an uncultured, engineering philistine).

    I'll just say that I really enjoyed reading it - I wanted to keep reading to the end. I really really liked the theme of a paranormal family history.

    My one critisism is that some of the descriptions (of the visions) were confusing. I can offer no insight as to how you would improve on them, but I hope that the honest opinion of an average punter, would be enlightening.

    I genuinely look forward to future chapters of the story.

    *Time for the old cliched, chuck-on-the-shoulder statement*

    Keep up the good work :D


  • #6
    BEAT
    Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    thanks for that iceman, I appreciate the comments ;)
    I havnt begun writing the next part yet, I have been working on some other things...I will get back to it soon I hope and will post it when I do ;)
    glad to hear the story is enjoyed so far!


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