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my own verse

eskkes · 2005-02-01 21:47:35

hey, i'm trying to write a short poem bout someone special, this is the first verse, anyone think i should carry on with it? just as the night time, turns into morning my head is aching it must be dawning rain drops like tears from my door

01-02-2005 9:47pm

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eskkes

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hey, i'm trying to write a short poem bout someone special, this is the first
verse,
anyone think i should carry on with it?

just as the night time,
turns into morning
my head is aching
it must be dawning
rain drops like tears from my door

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#2 01-02-2005 9:52pm

BEAT

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its only 1 verse...we cant make a judgement on it.
gwan and post the whole thing and we can then help you with it if it needs help
seems like a good start anyway...

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