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Ok this is to do with lidl cider and the downer it gave me

  • 11-01-2005 10:50pm
    #1
    rorygbluz
    Closed Accounts Posts: 43 ✭


    critics please tear it to shreds


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  • #2
    rorygbluz
    Closed Accounts Posts: 43 ✭rorygbluz


    Wired (A decent into a pit)

    I once was wired to the moon
    She was great to talk to during my connection
    Entered my thoughts...no deception
    But when I fell I held the wire tight
    Life behind my eyelids ceased
    As I fell down deep
    Sucked through the forest floor
    No light
    Pain
    I cannot remain
    I held the wire tighter still
    Called the moon
    Silence
    Still

    She laughed at my despair
    Deeper still I fell
    Held the wire
    Saw the fire
    Darkness,despair
    I didn’t care
    My bed
    My blanket
    My black prison.


  • #3
    solas
    Closed Accounts Posts: 1,999 ✭✭✭solas


    feels unfinished?

    She laughed at my despair
    Deeper still I fell
    Held the wire
    Saw the fire
    Darkness,despair
    I didn’t care
    My bed
    My blanket
    My black prison.
    waiting to come up for air

    felt like there was a ilne missing, so I satisfied myself, hope you don't mind.


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