A New Chapter 4 Us

ven0m

There is no happy ending,
Only the forty shades of grey,
Today becomes the history,
Of tomorrow's yesterday,
What does it take to make it work?
Is it a 'high', a 'low' or hurt?
You never paint inside the lines,
While I like everything neat & in line,
The strangeness of opposition,
the meeting of odds no preconditions,
the routines become a dance we do,
A story of us; one of me and you.

The same thoughts left unsaid,
Same fears based on the same dread,
Of what might be or not at all,
Same pen & same page on which both draw,
All because of our past pages,
Different troubles of different stages,
Of two lives that meet in one instant,
A million silences seeming more distant,
These are but pages of our book we read,
What's in the heart's what I believe.

The difficulties there we created,
Same problems & ideas, all inter-related,
All seeming distant buried in distraction,
Same reason existing for the initial attraction,
Two people who need to believe in trust,
To be able to sit down & write the next chapter,
from their book,
of their lives,
in the story of us.


::: ven0mous :::

Raphael

That's really amazing. There was one line that was a little dodgy though,

"While I like everything neat & in line,"

It seemed to have one more beat than it needed. Other than that...wow. You're an inspiration ven0m

the raven

not great.

this line is terrible:
"What's in the heart's what I believe"

edibility

I'm gonna be honest and say: I haven't read it. I did, however, read the title. 4 is a number. For, which I presume you mean, is a word. If you're going to write poetry in text speak I hope you die.