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An Epipfiny (or some sorta thing)

hgfj · 2020-08-04 18:43:17

1 We were tripping on mushrooms. Still young, still fearless, haw haw. Only thing was, back then, we didn't know much about anything. 2 I had an epipfiny, or some sorta thing. -Existence is fluid!- So I told my friends. 3 We laughed as we swam through the murky haze.

04-08-2020 07:43PM

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hgfj

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1
We were tripping on mushrooms.
Still young, still fearless, haw haw.
Only thing was, back then,
we didn't know much about anything.

2
I had an epipfiny,
or some sorta thing.
-Existence is fluid!-
So I told my friends.

3
We laughed as we swam
through the murky haze.

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#2 04-08-2020 08:15PM

hgfj

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#3 30-09-2020 12:35PM

Sheridan81

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Comes across as unfinished, unpolished, unrealised, just a embryo of a poem rather than an actual poem; an idea, not a finished product that entices and evokes. It doesn't emote or say anything profound.

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