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Help with Grammar

  • 10-05-2017 09:25PM
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    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 3


    Hello, I'm hoping someone can help me with a grammar issue.

    I am writing a tagline for a story and think the Grammar is incorrect i.e. It doesn't make sense.

    The line is...

    A love story of Motherhood.

    Is this grammatically wrong ?

    Other options..

    A love story about Motherhood
    A love story with Motherhood
    A Motherhood love story (I don't particularly like this one)
    Motherhood: A love story

    Any other ideas?

    Thanks in Advance.


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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 29,699 looksee
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    I am not sure that it is grammatically incorrect, but it is a bit clumsy. What do you mean by Motherhood, and why does it have a capital M? Are you referring to a specific mother's love for her child, or her love for the concept of motherhood, or are you referring to love in motherhood generally? Your last idea sounds better, but it may not necessarily express what you mean.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 5,141 Yakuza
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    "A love story from motherhood"? Otherwise your last idea is fine.


  • Moderators, Arts Moderators, Recreation & Hobbies Moderators, Social & Fun Moderators Posts: 78,113 New Home
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    Is it about a love story that takes place during someone's pregnancy, or is it about someone falling in love with the concept of being a mother?


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 558 Mearings
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    To Motherhood with Love. [?]


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