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I am new at this. A Poem?

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  • 26-07-2015 8:25am
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    Weetbix
    Registered Users Posts: 72 ✭✭


    My explanation is I am new at this, I am a novice, a newbie, innocent, fresh virgin.

    I lie to you.

    I don’t want to be blamed for my mistakes or my failures, so I will tell you what you must love to see.

    Yes, see not hear, when I call myself out as unmolded YOU see a canvas, that can display any color of your choice. YOU see a virgin yet to me molested by your criticism.

    Once you see me you no longer question your talent, your eye light up your achievements, that I, A virgin, cannot appreciation but not to worry you are here to build me up to be strong to be your fetus in the womb or your Auschwitz.

    this is terrible i am sorry I AM SO SORRY :(:(
    PLEASE FORGIVE!
    I literally just wrote this, his not my first poem but I write on and off but I want it to be frequency now, any criticism i can take it. Its meant to be spoken word... I don't know.
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