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  • #1
    Registered Users Posts: 103 ✭✭ sephsleft06


    Hi
    US country?
    anybody here do country,
    Just looking for feedback on this lyric
    particularly the lead in/ pre chorus....
    Not sure if it feels disjointed?








    verse 1

    …remember in my car.…
    We useta squeeze on through the front seat divide
    Dust flew, watering your blue eyes
    Streams ran down your moon-lit cheeks
    From a place, so pure

    I useta run out of ev'ryday things to say
    Only so much happened those days
    You probably caught me staring at you?
    and Spotting your blonde locks falling
    From the rearview

    (lead in)

    ... but...
    You were
    Tied to the idea
    of Having that fitted suit
    and Leaning by water coolers
    and
    I was
    Tied to the idea
    of Making you believe
    Our love's got more to lose


    Now I'm left..
    with….

    Chorus (mainly oo vowel rhyme)

    a... Backseat that wears your perfume….
    Lends me your scent, makes me think all about you
    Fading trail of fairy tale nights
    Call it deja vu,
    I call it, losing you
    When I should be lovin' you,
    leavin' me with
    a backseat that wears your perfume
    leavin' me with
    a backseat that wears your perfume
    but...
    that backseat won't grow out of your perfume


    Verse 11

    When you left I smashed in the cars's tail lights
    Rubbed off tight gates scrapin' its side
    yeah my Mind got the upper hand
    I felt the strain
    Felt myself breathing so deep,
    thinkin' 'bout what happened b'tween us
    And the shouldve's and could'ves
    Pushed through each Gap in my brain


    lead in

    and I...
    Wondered was there
    Any part of you
    That wanted
    Any part of me
    ….Is there a part of you ?
    ….that Wants any part of me
    cause all I have of you…




    Chorus

    a... Backseat that wears your perfume….
    Lends me your scent, makes me think all about you
    a Fading trail of fairy tale nights
    Call it deja vu,
    I call it, losing you
    When I shoulda' been lovin' you,
    leaving me with
    a backseat that wears your perfume
    but I know,
    My backseat will never grow out of your perfume





    bridge ideas



    And if you ever decide to come back,
    I'll plant a reserved sign,

    on..



    Chorus

    my Backseat that wears your perfume….
    Lends me your scent, makess me think all about you
    a Fading trail of fairy tale nights
    Call it deja vu,
    I call it, losing you
    When I shoulda' been lovin' you,
    leaving me with
    a backseat that wears your perfume
    but I know,
    My backseat will never grow out of your perfume



    Chorus rpt






    *Ends * Ends *Ends….(*ends) ENDS………….


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