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A poem i guess

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  • 28-04-2015 2:26pm
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    Kerrangatang92
    Registered Users Posts: 28 ✭


    Hey. Hope this belongs here.. Am interested in hearing some feedback on this poem (I guess I would call it a poem) that just crept into my head. (its probably just a collection of words... but anyways here it is.

    ''People ask
    I respond
    I wish
    I wish many things
    But I'm not that person,
    the world is big
    way too big.''

    So that was that... I don't normally write poetry... but lately have been taking notes of some things... anyways let me know what you think of that. Sound :)


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    mister gullible
    Registered Users Posts: 463 ✭✭mister gullible


    It don't rhyme
    But that's no crime.

    Write to please yourself. Are you happy with it?


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    Kerrangatang92
    Registered Users Posts: 28 ✭Kerrangatang92


    Thanks Mister... I like your reply. And to answer, my answer is 'I suppose'.


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