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My new track

altus__ · 2014-01-01 22:45:54

Hey guys, I'm a DJ/Producer from the Toronto, Canada area. I recently completed my first track using ableton and I need feedback. Good, bad, or ugly, all feedback is welcome. Here is the link --> https://soundcloud.com/altus_toronto/bounce-original-mix Regards

01-01-2014 10:45pm

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altus__

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Hey guys,

I'm a DJ/Producer from the Toronto, Canada area. I recently completed my first track using ableton and I need feedback. Good, bad, or ugly, all feedback is welcome. Here is the link --> https://soundcloud.com/altus_toronto/bounce-original-mix

Regards

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#2 02-01-2014 11:26am

mordeith

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altus__ wrote: »

Hey guys,

I'm a DJ/Producer from the Toronto, Canada area. I recently completed my first track using ableton and I need feedback. Good, bad, or ugly, all feedback is welcome. Here is the link --> https://soundcloud.com/altus_toronto/bounce-original-mix

Regards

Better off posting over in the Dance Music Production forum:
http://www.boards.ie/vbulletin/showthread.php?t=2055583801&page=191

Having said that it's a pretty nice track. The arrangement is a bit odd at times in terms of where breaks occur IMO. I think you need to loose some low end from the bassline as it gets a bit muddy, especially in the second half of the track. It could probably do with being a bit shorter as well. I think the section from 3.10 to 4.14 is the best and could form the basis for a real decent track if it was tightened up a bit.

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