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Track i made

19-12-2013 03:58AM

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ARMATHERAPPER

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Check out my track guys and give a like if you can.

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#2 19-12-2013 11:48AM

Boom_Bap

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If this is a start up track, then it's not bad.

But, you really need to structure your lines better, you are dragging out too many words to fill the bar.

Also, don't use the word Hater.

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#3 26-12-2013 04:13PM

shane9689

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post it in the feedback thread, guys there will give you good feedback on where you can improve it
http://www.boards.ie/vbulletin/showthread.php?t=2055583801

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